ayo nice ass peice of work u got here, yea dope, keep up tha good work
ayo nice ass peice of work u got here, yea dope, keep up tha good work
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=238823
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=241039
^^two links i left decent feed on...forgot to put um in before....
yo if you really feelin the piece then nominate and participate figaadeal me?
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dude that stuff was ill beyond belief.
keep that up and you'll get yerself a record label mayne.
good work
aight mayne that wuz ill.
yer multiz were sick mayne STRAIGHT UP SICK.
da flow was PERFECT and da structure was nice.
that was sweet
keep that shit up.
that was wassup feelin ya werdplay
thas wassup...
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uppin for feed
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loven the wordplay metaphores adn vocab... adn i see the way u put it together and how u formed ur multis.. i can tell that u have tru thought and passion for rap adn life.... u have potential to be one of the greats.....the only tihng is with the words u was usen the syllables waas thowin off ur stucture in sum places.... dont matta much thought... still a very dope peice homie....
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Battles that need sum luvn
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Open Mic's
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feed me
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tryin to get more feed
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yo ur links r dope as well, dawg u just found ur self a career!
[QUOTE=ApOsTaSy]hey man this was pretty dope shit....i liked your word play. it had decent imagery, which you could work on just a little bit, but overall, pretty dope.
to me....these were your best bars....
-Stopped on blocks, dropped on hock, rolled on souls, just buried cherries popped on those.
- Shot up and poisoned street veins run deep on the clock, see treason get knocked on woes.
-The shop lifted on lock restricted entrance, malevolence carries a greater sentence from top it grows.
-Spot train, drop the refrain, picture perfection attempted but not in the frame, knots in the name, base headed cant stop on goes.
i agree
i dunno tht was pretty whack but its better than anythin tht i could come up with so yeah it wasnt bad
hmmm...i dunno it was pretty whack...so it wasnt bad...oxymorron maybe?
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