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Thread: Wrath of War 2 (The Final Chapter) Wordplay back 2 back

  1. October 6th, 2005, 07:17 AM #1
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    Wrath of War 2 (The Final Chapter) Wordplay back 2 back

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    My thought-train is hurtling forth-battling forces-dark
    Trepidation, unlock visions, tour places cursed & stark
    Realism, unleashing the stampede of a thousand horses
    Deaths in the desert, vultures feed on children corpses
    Raged-rebels damn politics verses plight of the ethnic’
    Simple spiteful shit, this is ice water spiked with arsenic
    Poison plans in the hands of the idle, tools for the devil
    Troops murder for medals, alert terror suicidal threat level
    Raises a panic, heavy metal flame spit through your jacket
    Scars & slashes, hostility torn city: scarlet blood splashes
    Soldiers return to ashes & dust, stone-tomb open & shut
    Closed cavity, until the dead-living resurrect as zombie
    The Godlike uphold shields: taking chagrin on the chin
    Guiltless perish people puzzled, trapped in with the link
    Swim-or-sink in the dark on the brink of acts-heartless
    Trip-up adversaries vibrate like spark-off semtex charges
    Crisis boils starving village nigaz reap near zilch for toil
    Destroying acres of soil fertile while they digging for oil
    Nucleic turmoil crumbling concrete, assume for mass mess
    Worthy of death, the holocaust finale moves into aspect


    War faces east to west, a contest of blood-sport
    We caught up in this madness...abort...ABORT.

    The Wrath of War.
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  2. October 6th, 2005, 07:32 AM #2
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  3. October 6th, 2005, 08:51 AM #3
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    decent....better then elevate.......but........................Wheres the wordplay....I think your confused on what wordplay is.......wordplay=play on words
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  4. October 6th, 2005, 11:33 AM #4
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mic_Dareall
    decent....better then elevate.......but........................Wheres the wordplay....I think your confused on what wordplay is.......wordplay=play on words



    read it properly


    especialy the first line


    wordplay back to back


    reversed wordplay

    study the science man





    example.. cliche..."train of thought"

    i wrote-
    My thought-train is hurtling forth-battling forces-dark


    dark-forces... becomes forces-dark


    and the whole piece tries to follow the same pattern of wordplay in places


    any more comments???????????????????/



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  5. October 6th, 2005, 01:35 PM #5
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  6. October 6th, 2005, 01:46 PM #6
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    this song iz tight

    like this joint!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  7. October 6th, 2005, 02:12 PM #7
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    thats not wordplay kid..
    ...... "My train of thought has lost its tracks"...<--wordplay..

    ...flipping words around is not wordplay

    worplay = play on words....playing on the MEANING of words
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  8. October 6th, 2005, 04:06 PM #8
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    lolz.. do u know what "play" means
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  9. October 6th, 2005, 11:37 PM #9
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    Good stuff...I loved the whole thing it had a good topic...you stayed on track...part 1 was kind of "Meh" compared to this...but they were good...this one had more multis while the other had more metas....you seemed to split the wordplay into groups....It was a good concept...Nice work here and keep it up....

    Comment me on "The Art Of War"......Peace good stuff...keep writing...
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  10. October 7th, 2005, 08:55 AM #10
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    good looks out blud

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  11. October 7th, 2005, 03:48 PM #11
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    uhm! not much feed on this then?


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  12. October 7th, 2005, 03:55 PM #12
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    good topic

    get out the - though. i learned that the hard way lol, damn nice topic.... good flow and multies

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    this is perhaps the gayest thread...ALIVE....
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  13. October 7th, 2005, 04:05 PM #13
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    safe blud.. the piecer you got on the page i hit already

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  14. October 7th, 2005, 04:09 PM #14
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    this was pretty nice man... flow was there..wordplay was aight...work on incorporating bigger vocab and more multis..overall pretty nice joint

    peace
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  15. October 7th, 2005, 04:13 PM #15
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    Quote Originally Posted by cephas
    this was pretty nice man... flow was there..wordplay was aight...work on incorporating bigger vocab and more multis..overall pretty nice joint

    peace

    uhm thanks i guess

    but this had more than enuff multies for me.. no use in forcing in some crap that could mess it up

    i just flow with the story and dont force anything in


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