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  1. September 15th, 2005, 07:03 PM #1
    TheCrunkKing
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    Arrow Darth Vader

    yo, im Darth Vader,kill you with the force
    choke yo ass, killin you, with no remorse
    If you dont die, your voice will be hoarce
    Or we can go toe to toe,pull out my saber
    stick it in yo fuckin throat, blue or red flavor? {Get it,Diff colors of sabers}
    Hey, is that obi one?wait,you dont have a savor
    you rep the light, i rep the dark side
    Its darth vader bitches, run and hide
    in a ferocios battle, we collide
    ill chop off yo motha fuckin head
    Make your ass dead
    pull out my gun, start shootin lazers
    those other stuped Jedis, usin tazers
    then i take a sec, to cath my breath
    yeah,i breeth weird,either that or its death
    the only reason i breeth like that, is becuse of meth
    okay, now im back to fightin, they all scared, cus in the sith
    pick ya up with the force, throw yo ass off a cliff


    Its a work in progress, i just want to know if the people of RB think i should keep workin on THIS song.....please tell me wat u think
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  2. September 15th, 2005, 07:10 PM #2
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    my links

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=232501

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=232720
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  3. September 15th, 2005, 07:11 PM #3
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    get to uppin yall, tell me wat ya think!!!!!!!!!!!
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  4. September 15th, 2005, 07:19 PM #4
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    U ok but u need a better structure tho wit more wordplay and a better flow
    U good at the crunk songs hommie
    Got potential but u need a lil more guidence
    Overall 6.5/10
    Hit up mine in my sig

    If u need help written or wanna collab PM me ~1~

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  5. September 15th, 2005, 07:54 PM #5
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    more uppin yall, dont be lazey, uppppppinnnnn!!!!!
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  6. September 15th, 2005, 08:16 PM #6
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    uppin motherfukas, dont be lazey!!!, up up up up up up
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  7. September 15th, 2005, 08:30 PM #7
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    iv gotta hand it 2 ya u got skills but it seemed a bit rushed takin a little time 2 think will help it wont loose ya cred! think b4 u write but u definitely got tha skills i dont boubt that keep goin!! peace!! rb no1!! holla!!!
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  8. September 15th, 2005, 09:02 PM #8
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=232720
    heres another freestyle, straight off the dome

    lil jon the crunkest motherfuka, YEAHHHHHHHH, OKAYY!!!!
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  9. September 15th, 2005, 09:05 PM #9
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    totwoo those were the links fo the other stuff to judge me on....all well

    hers anotrher incase
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=232720
    heres another freestyle, straight off the dome
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  10. September 15th, 2005, 09:10 PM #10
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    lol, interesting topic

    pretty crappy to me, its seemed like geek gangsta rap.
    um dont do something like this agian, try to get more complexity in your rhymes.
    Choose s better topic and more creativity.

    keep it up
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  11. September 15th, 2005, 09:29 PM #11
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    this is ur first post, shut the fuck up, its not suposed to be a gangsta rap, fuck off, its supposed to be a mess around song, it has creatvity in it, so fuck off "n00b to rap"...keep uppin
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  12. September 15th, 2005, 10:36 PM #12
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    i wouldn't have chose that topic, but overall it was mehhh........no hate but u need to elevate on your wordplay and structure.........i kno dis wasn't a battle verse but structure help's your flow............some part's i liked. like da color saber line.....(nice)..........but all in all we all have room to elevate so do so...........keep dropping iight my nigg
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  13. September 15th, 2005, 10:44 PM #13
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    ight mane, thanks fo da feed,keep uppim my niggas!
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  14. September 15th, 2005, 11:38 PM #14
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    ok I think its a good concept usin comics like 50 did with Gatman, but I thought "pullin out my gun shootin lasers" was a lil exteme.... flow seemed a little short.. I like the concept just dont make it too star wars if you know wut I mean.. contine with the songs tho.
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  15. September 15th, 2005, 11:45 PM #15
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