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  1. August 5th, 2005, 04:53 PM #1
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    The End of the world

    One day somebody told me the world would end
    He said a week from now hell would send...
    7 demons in human skin and set 7 bombs
    I left and tryed to stay very calm
    I waz worryed he might be right
    Maybe a week later the will be a heaven hell fight
    I couldn't stop think bout wut the man said
    I tryed not the think bout it but it stayed in my head
    The 2 day later volcanos started to erupt
    I waz watchin the new a sayin "what the fuck"
    The man waz right I waz scared as hell
    Right now I rather be in a fuck jail cell
    Then 2 days later I saw a light from heaven
    Then a loud voice said "3 DAYS TILL ARMOGEDEN"
    I waz in fuck shock the ashes from all the erupts burn my eyes
    But didn't care bout that cause in 3 days I'm gonna die
    Next day earthquakes happen and like the man said
    7 demon can out wit bomb on their head
    Man when I saw that I waz bout to cry
    The the devil Said "2 more days and all u mutha fuckas gonna die"
    I waz so scared that I could move until the 6th day
    The last day that we lived so I sat there on my knees to pray
    It waz so much smoke in the air it waz kill ppl before the 7th day
    I sat on the ground and wonder when waz the world gonna anyway
    It waz the 7th day were we all cryin cause we were all gonna be dyin
    Then that voice of the devil came and said "Stop all that damn cryin"
    So we stood there as the clock hit zero on the bomb
    Then the world waz ended and so waz the song
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  2. August 5th, 2005, 04:56 PM #2
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  3. August 5th, 2005, 05:35 PM #3
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    yo that was sick..i was feelin the flow and the rhyming too..i like the topic..good job
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  4. August 5th, 2005, 05:40 PM #4
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  5. August 5th, 2005, 06:13 PM #5
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  6. August 5th, 2005, 06:32 PM #6
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  7. August 5th, 2005, 06:56 PM #7
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    Bleh, this concept is over used. And the way you done it
    was off point. Creative yes, but not necessarily. Worder the
    whole verse poorly and lots of misspellings that got annoying.
    Work on your flow too, because a lot of lines were stretched
    so horribly that it didnt flow at all. Imagery was poor and the
    emotion wasnt very good either.

    Sub-par drop.

    chea.
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    "You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
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  8. August 5th, 2005, 06:57 PM #8
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  9. August 5th, 2005, 07:22 PM #9
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  10. August 5th, 2005, 09:26 PM #10
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  11. August 5th, 2005, 09:59 PM #11
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  12. August 5th, 2005, 10:06 PM #12
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    This was good but it sounds like you worded some of the things wrong.. If you go back and say it to yourself youll flow good. But over all this was a ok drop. I like the concept i havent heard it on RB yet.
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  13. August 5th, 2005, 11:10 PM #13
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  15. August 6th, 2005, 02:16 AM #15
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    this one needs elevation....rhyme scheme..vocab...wordplay...everything...keep elevatin and droppin.~1`


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