:::A Life Failure:::

[ToK SiK]

........AlifeFailure
a high school drop out a mother fuckin cop out
Pac bout style battle verses gotta use in rehearses
so sweet and harmonized there ryhmed in churches
align in lineups for criminal worded crimes and curses
purses get stolen when im around cars are gettin jacked
when u hear the car alarm sound im hellbound
shell founded by .33's mother fuckin trees shift to hang me
gun bustaz run to hunt this drop out
pop did it so i can to hows it feel to say ya dad never made it through school
makes ya own ass look like a goddamn fool
pool shark hustler start usin dope and started hustlin just to cope
just to get buy smokin coke just to get high
failure for life found out at age 25
twenty times in and out of juvie and jail
asked god to shoot me and let my soul prevail
revealed that i could never be as real as em
but tryed hard as shit never ever let the pressure give in
swimmin in this big pool of guilt lifes like tryin to walk the tight rope with stilts
still im losin never gonna be a high roller never roll in beverilly hills cruisin in porsches..
ima work home depot puttin up trailer porches....


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=215669
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=214975

[M9nd Fl_lkt]

Over all this was a nice track. It lacks structure tho and the flow was off due to that. Content was decent, nothing really stood out as a jaw dropper, but none the less it was a decent track. And when ya get a chance can ya give me some critique on track Boom feat. me an jmo?

[ToK SiK]

Thanks for tha feedback...........................

[ToK SiK]

why u droppin that here man start your own thread

[M9nd Fl_lkt]

yea i think he ment to post that in the thread he started that said "oh okay" and thats it lol and hurry up an peep this track for me http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=214926

[sILLable]

not bad....your piece was average...all of it...you could improve your vocab and your wordplay abit..other than that not too bad....keep droppin and elevatin.~1`