10 lines
10 min.
you know the rules....so g luck man
YungenB
mc strom
10 lines
10 min.
you know the rules....so g luck man
iight check-up yo...........
chec.............................................. ..........................k
iight dis is my check in you got 10 min....no lata or you dq'd
Take a red hot curling iron & run it ~Along-Ur-Crack-Bitch!~ .. Put ur hands in a rack & stretch ur ~Palms-Like-Elasitic~ ..Im ~Calm-Wit-The-Tactics~ ..Thats why ill gargle his bile before giving him his ~Last-Kiss~ & ~Embalm-Wit-My-Own-Piss~ .. All right before 'Baptising Him' in sulfuric acid like ~John-The-Baptist!~
Clamp ur mouth open & Sew ur ~Crews-Dicks-Inside~ .. Then turn a porno on for them to watch as they ~Spooge-Sick&-Cry~ .. Cum seeping thru ya ears ~Tooths-&-Eyes~ .. Ur nothing but a ~NooB-Bitch-Die!~ .. So ill nail kitchen knives ~Thru-Wrists&-Thighs~ Drink The blood from his ~Boots-Clit&-Sides~ & leave him hanging like Jesus was ~Crusified!~
go take a dirt bath
check it..........
your punches often miss and those that don't are just "soften hits"
but what else can you expect when you throwin punches with "cotton fists"
doubt you'd rip" even if you verse was printed on "wet newspapers"
you've seen "defeat" more times than "professional shoelacers"
so when you drop your verse you can say your rhymes are underground
a "tabacco kid" , cause imma "light you up" and "smoke you ...............
.................................................. ................until my "lungs are brown"
...................know look ya'll i can tell from his avy that dis kid is shookin
now imma page Hooked on Phonics and tell em that their lines been tookin
I'll put the wood to ur teeth..................... leave u like splintered trees
cuz i roll wit more blacks wit bats ..................than the Negro Leagues
......*sigh*........
lol there's two.........................computer prob'z?
iight yo uppin for votes #1
UPPin............................................. .....
.........uppin #2..........need votes........ya'll quit being lazy......
uppin............................................. ....
youngen wins dis
had a better flow punchlines and nice word play
i got to give it to youngnb that nigga had better punches and his personals went better with his all around flow.
mc storm had a nice little flow but some of the punches just weren't hitting for me the flow was sort of choppy but overall just alright to me
v- youngnb holla at my battles if u can momo.1oo
iight ya'll appreciate da feed will vote on ya battles if i haven't all ready......2-0...uppin for votes #3
ms- u had an ok flow but the lines uhad were kinda weak u had very weak personals and everythin else was simple need to work on that and u had alot of stretched out lines try not to makeem that long cuz it was hard readin them so just work on that and ull elevate
yb- ur verse was good had a nice opener and nice closer u had good punch lines that packed need to work a little on tha flow though but u had those punches that backed it up
v/ yb- cuz he had punches that packed and the other didnt really have nothin special but both can elevate i give the battle to yb
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