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Thread: The Walk (Dope!)

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    The Walk (Dope!)

    incase u guys wanna follow the beat I used to write this song I wrote it to "Between The Lines by Atmosphere"

    Verse #1:
    well I didn’t know it, I never knew it till the hot sun
    dawned on my face, waking the vented cocked gun
    of life, step once and step twice towards the next day and night
    cuz in this dream, a reality as to what it would seem
    capturing the memories of my life as it passes me
    and then I stand stripped, ripped torn from my grip
    until I can feel myself slip into the next drift

    I feel as if caught in a waking dream so seamless
    it makes it hard for me to believe that I can feel this
    so I walk down this road the sun bathed the streets
    capturing the images that I whisper when I speak
    and so solemn the atmosphere resonates it’s moonlit glow
    the northern lights dancing above the trails of white snow
    and it was then that I saw u standing aside from the distance
    vibrant and graceful with the blonde hair testing it’s existence

    I couldn’t begin to look upon your sporadic glow
    helpless I couldn’t notice the warmth surrounding the snow
    and I questioned my belligerence to attempt a discussion
    pushing mind past my fears approaching the circumference
    of this circular emotion, loaded to the fragrance of lust
    bottled and pushed with the perfume you bust
    and I’m captured instantaneously, drawn to the smell
    but dawn breaks and I wake thinkin “what the hell”

    Hook: (x2)
    the walk of sleep dreaming of are fake reality
    the walk of our life waking to a technicality
    but sometimes we wish to never wake up
    cuz dreams are to good to be true like what the fuck

    Verse #2:
    so it was over, ended just like that, next time
    I’ma smash my alarm clock with a baseball bat
    cuz I’m just so sick of the living life with this 9 to 5 job
    minimum wage hard to pay rent and I’m livin like a slob
    so what’s left for there to do
    take a shower tie up my shoes
    grab my keys get my beater and leave
    just another day thinkin “man I wanna sleep”
    but I get back home late, work tied up my pace
    sit down with some rye and a cigarette to chase
    and just think, think about the girl in my dreams
    think about how it would be skinny dippin in the sea

    ........................ until I slipt back into my sleep

    Hook: (x2)
    the walk of sleep dreaming of are fake reality
    the walk of our life waking to a technicality
    but sometimes we wish to never wake up
    cuz dreams are to good to be true like what the fuck

    Verse #3:
    the setting darkness enveloping my room
    the blue light from the blinds glooming with the mood
    the smell of candle incense burning with a soft light
    swelling the room with the most pleasurable delight

    and so it happened, there I was next to this beauty
    in the comfort of my bed feeling so truly
    blessed, as she dragged her fingers across my naked chest

    I breathed deep to the sensational touch
    reaching over to grab everything that I must
    thinking to myself that “I just can’t get enough”

    so after a brief moment we kissed and cuddled
    ........ snuggled with each other ever so subtle
    dying for this moment to never end
    remembering “this dream is reality my friend”

    so morning rolls around and I sit and I wait
    for my baby girl to awake for the breakfast I make
    then I see her approach downstairs from up
    and I gaze upon her figure thinkin “man I have the luck”

    Feedback:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...16#post2289616
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=184494
    <center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=red)>Atmosphere - inspirations of following in the footsteps of story tellin rhymes</table></center>

    <center>Corrupted Visions</center>

    <center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>Giving Sight A Third Eye</table></center>

    Act One:

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    Polished and refined to bring a new groove to crews/
    gestures meaning lesser to negotiations between me and you/
    so what’s this heartache all of a sudden edge’in to your seat/
    fuck it, cement shoes and 200 feet oughta be pretty sweet/</table>


    Words of Wisdom:

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    color="blue"><table style=filter:GLOW(color=white)>it's perplexity set in a realism of our world/
    it's textual content, stepping stones on broken pearls/
    if wisdom is a need be vent for visualizing truth/
    then let be proof, demise the break between adults and youth/</table>

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    come on ppl stop sleepin and drop me some feed.
    <center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=red)>Atmosphere - inspirations of following in the footsteps of story tellin rhymes</table></center>

    <center>Corrupted Visions</center>

    <center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>Giving Sight A Third Eye</table></center>

    Act One:

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    Polished and refined to bring a new groove to crews/
    gestures meaning lesser to negotiations between me and you/
    so what’s this heartache all of a sudden edge’in to your seat/
    fuck it, cement shoes and 200 feet oughta be pretty sweet/</table>


    Words of Wisdom:

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    color="blue"><table style=filter:GLOW(color=white)>it's perplexity set in a realism of our world/
    it's textual content, stepping stones on broken pearls/
    if wisdom is a need be vent for visualizing truth/
    then let be proof, demise the break between adults and youth/</table>

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    chorus was tight and the verse was preaty good cheah that was str8 ight ight then

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    quit sleepin ppl. uppin this.
    <center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=red)>Atmosphere - inspirations of following in the footsteps of story tellin rhymes</table></center>

    <center>Corrupted Visions</center>

    <center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>Giving Sight A Third Eye</table></center>

    Act One:

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    Polished and refined to bring a new groove to crews/
    gestures meaning lesser to negotiations between me and you/
    so what’s this heartache all of a sudden edge’in to your seat/
    fuck it, cement shoes and 200 feet oughta be pretty sweet/</table>


    Words of Wisdom:

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    color="blue"><table style=filter:GLOW(color=white)>it's perplexity set in a realism of our world/
    it's textual content, stepping stones on broken pearls/
    if wisdom is a need be vent for visualizing truth/
    then let be proof, demise the break between adults and youth/</table>

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    come on ppl stop sleepin on this. drop me feedback
    <center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=red)>Atmosphere - inspirations of following in the footsteps of story tellin rhymes</table></center>

    <center>Corrupted Visions</center>

    <center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>Giving Sight A Third Eye</table></center>

    Act One:

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    Polished and refined to bring a new groove to crews/
    gestures meaning lesser to negotiations between me and you/
    so what’s this heartache all of a sudden edge’in to your seat/
    fuck it, cement shoes and 200 feet oughta be pretty sweet/</table>


    Words of Wisdom:

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    color="blue"><table style=filter:GLOW(color=white)>it's perplexity set in a realism of our world/
    it's textual content, stepping stones on broken pearls/
    if wisdom is a need be vent for visualizing truth/
    then let be proof, demise the break between adults and youth/</table>

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    beyond dope.
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    *drops feedback*

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    ight this wasnt DOPE but was a decent drop man...im impressed you need more vocabulary and to structure it abit bteer but yeah good work man.

    peep my shit

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    yea I know just put that there because my OM's constantly get slept on. I figure if u at least got somethin there it might actual appeal to someone to at least check it out and with this piece I wasn't really goin for a full out drop of vocabulary it's meant to be more of just a slower pace just somethin to kinda kick back and relax to. but thanx for the feed lookin for some more.
    <center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=red)>Atmosphere - inspirations of following in the footsteps of story tellin rhymes</table></center>

    <center>Corrupted Visions</center>

    <center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>Giving Sight A Third Eye</table></center>

    Act One:

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    Polished and refined to bring a new groove to crews/
    gestures meaning lesser to negotiations between me and you/
    so what’s this heartache all of a sudden edge’in to your seat/
    fuck it, cement shoes and 200 feet oughta be pretty sweet/</table>


    Words of Wisdom:

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    color="blue"><table style=filter:GLOW(color=white)>it's perplexity set in a realism of our world/
    it's textual content, stepping stones on broken pearls/
    if wisdom is a need be vent for visualizing truth/
    then let be proof, demise the break between adults and youth/</table>

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    all good man...i havnt seen anything from you and wasnt expecting as good so man you done well you got high potential just take into account what i said.,..good looks

    hit my shit up please.

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