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    Exclamation Modern education

    Modern education



    A keystyle addressed to most of the kids in here:

    Dusted papers on a rusted shelf, mental exhausted I myself,
    Encrusted in integrals I melt, transcendental thoughts to,
    Questions nobody pelt, looking for answers to give me truth,
    Equations balanced like a dancer gave me knowledge that should
    Be acknowledged necessary for someone’s passing youth,
    But to most not even secondary,not encompassing what would
    Be elementary for a normal thinking human being…I look
    At the deprived world & I’m seeing the contrary wherever I look,
    Eighteen years old never read a book in their entire life,
    I behold a vision that starts to subside and be wiped with a flannel,
    Education is in the television only if you watch Discovery Channel,
    I witness the abjuration of mathematics,physics,philosophy,
    To eyes-shut kids whom systematically renounce what should be
    A proof of neural activity,you enounce the theory of brain atrophy,
    YOU aren’t same as me,you’re nothing but an example of cultural
    Imbalance…It’s unconceivable one day you’ll be somebody’s parents,
    With your unbeliveble arrogance,knowing nothing about the world,
    Geography,biology,history or art…You don't have dignity in your heart,
    You have the opportunities for learning that many don’t have,
    …….But instead you’re yawning like your mental activities and
    It’s sad…Dumb kids know this:no education=you are fools,
    Go to school and forget about having 50 cent’s jewels!

    Go to schoollearnread books…otherwise,then,
    You are just a waste of much needed oxygen…


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    iight its a creative idea, tha vocab was there tha flo was there...seemed pretty str8 forward ta me, kinda funny at tha same time lol buh keep em comin man

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    yo that pretty migh smart idea forsure good drop man

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    Yo that verse was tight, fire forshow dog. Keep doin ur thing nice drop u ill.....



    LMAO....Nah...I'm just fuckin with ya. Ill piece for real man. Sad part is most of those kids you were addressing in this piece wont read it or it will go over their head...ahh the irony. Vocab was crazy in here, really feeling that made certain parts stand out. Your first four lines were really impressive. Went with a different rhyme scheme but it was a good change for u, I think it came out good. Anyway as usual this will probably get slept on too, but at least I'll be good for one uppin for you. Peace

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    thx Na...and i know it's ironic.I think even IF THEY READ IT they wouldn't get the idea.but i know they won't read it,just post some stupid shit in my thread.
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    uppin this
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    this was nice man
    true too......
    keep droppin shit like this man

    (oh your signature thing "Read if you want quality." issss kinda cocky and makes you look like a prick)
    just a tip
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    Originally Posted by Murkage
    lol..im loving this

    serves you right for fucking wit me slide, and i did nothing to you....
    i am a nice guy serious..

    and i think your maturity level is 000000.1 after this eminem incident..
    and you were dissing my audios lol.....the nerve of this bitch
    well ive reported you..you will be banned..
    now fuck off!
    Aw shit this guy has dirt on you! dont fuck wit him!

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    forgot about this...
    uppin....
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    uppin again^^

    Are you a canibus fan? I caught something in that that reminded of canibus. Anyhow... good topic and well executed as well. I dug the vocab and the imagery you used. I think a few multi's would've helped the flow, but in all other respects this was a dope piece. Good work man.

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    this was a good piece man for sure, it was very clever and the vocab was absolutely crazy,the scructure was well laid out 2 keep em comin bro 9/10

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    rofl.. i felt that this was a diss against me.. oh well..

    this was good, real nice vocab., flow was tight..

    and honestly..

    there was only one main flaw (im not sayin this out of hate), i mean everything was good and all, but the rhyme scheme was weak at most parts, and i feel that it should be upped..

    nice drop tho... a concept done before, but this was portrayed in a new direction.. coz usually shit like this is directed at ignorant hip-hop heads.

    peace, and return the favor with an honest opinion..

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=2257002

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    Man, this was hella nice.

    I was really feeling your topic as it was kinda attacking people on this site in different ways.
    YOur vocabulary as in all your pieces is very well, and your messages are always well put.
    Overall this is a well thought out piece, and seens as you fixed your spelling and punctuation, you have the oppertunity to be one of the best topical heads on this site.

    Keep makin HnR proud son

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    i like dat datz da truf

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