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  1. March 30th, 2005, 08:40 AM #1
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    Fake Mcs

    It's strange you pretend your a thug but you still cant cross the street
    If somebody handed you a gun you would turn cold and toss the heat
    You couldnt scare the little kids on your street im stressing worlds
    You out battle me hahaha theres more chance of jacko molesting girls
    No go back to your bedroom cause you'll be dead soon so take the advice
    I got mad flow your lyrics make no sense what so ever like dating a dyke
    Your rhymes are so bad they need to redefine the term wack
    Give up your dreams and retire so just listen and learn facts
    your the type to go jail scream and shout and plead for security
    Ha ha ha i cant stop laughing you talk tough but you just out of puberty
    Im warchild blessed with raw style all the rap vets scream
    When i rap you won a battle once but that was a wet dream
    I love props but the one thing i hate is envy
    Pick up the flow if you cant you a fake mc
    Yo you best bounce cause where i come from we stab gays ive had more court apperances than whitney houstons had rehab stays

    This is just a verse of mostly frresstyle shit i was typing this as i was thinking it im just bored as hell flow as nice its just a little verse for you fake thugs who are 15 acting hard and talking shit when you know you a pussy lol.
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  2. March 30th, 2005, 09:17 AM #2
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    Links:
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=182257
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  3. March 30th, 2005, 09:22 AM #3
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    Not bad, Keep it son.
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  4. March 30th, 2005, 09:25 AM #4
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    I posted the wrong links these are the proper links:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=182100
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=182246
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  5. March 30th, 2005, 09:28 AM #5
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    Aim for tha head/ when u say im gon getem nigga//Aim for tha head/ when u say im gon getem nigga//Aim for tha head/ when u say im gon getem nigga//cass lit they ass just to let them know u aint playin witem
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    nice drop yo liked ur punches and tha delivery to them and ur word structure and flow was pretty good but u need to work more on vocab choices so tha verse can sound intellectual u know but dont overdue it so u know how to ryme overall rate- 8.0/10 good job really take my hat off to u if i had one lol
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  6. March 30th, 2005, 10:04 AM #6
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    yo ^^ word...good drop...however im 15
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  7. March 30th, 2005, 04:33 PM #7
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    ok this are a little different than the other OMs i read from you but i can still see your style:the piece flows nice to the eye,the rhymescheme is ok(could be improved),and you have funny lines,but you had other much better in other pieces you wrote than in this one.this seemed and i think it is a keystyle...i like the topic and the way you transmit the messege(the idiot kids here on OM acting like they'r the shit).ok..what else?vocabulary was kinda simple but i noticed you like it more that way,so do it the way you like it.Because you're writting mostly for you.the structure was good,some multis...overal a nice read!keep it up!

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  8. March 30th, 2005, 04:42 PM #8
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    not bad at all...do like the style play in the verse...good shit
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  9. March 30th, 2005, 04:43 PM #9
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    you not bad at all good work

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  10. March 31st, 2005, 08:52 AM #10
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    Appreciate the feed this was pretty much a little freesstyle piece uppin once more.
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  11. March 31st, 2005, 09:26 AM #11
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    nice shit....it flow good...u stay on topic and shit....and it's tight 4 a lil keystyle.....I like the start of the verse...

    "It's strange you pretend your a thug but you still cant cross the street
    If somebody handed you a gun you would turn cold and toss the heat"


    thats hot....

    i'ma drop soon ...hit me back
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  12. April 1st, 2005, 07:01 AM #12
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  13. April 1st, 2005, 08:53 AM #13
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    Good job this was summat quick coz the structure was bad. But the flow wasnt effected that much and you hit some pretty decent punchlines. I think if you say and wrote somethin' meaningful and took your time you could go far...you have the potential to do so.

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