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  1. February 28th, 2005, 04:18 AM #1
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    Bully me?

    Your condidtions crititcal in the metaphysycal, whats funny....?
    nuthin im just wishen big frankie didnt steal my lunch money...
    fuck dummies lets watch this bitch scatter,
    Im gettin sick faster...
    Premeditateds a bitch but this doesnt matter...
    Clean up after i re-up n make his blood splatter....
    lets comprehend what your sayin spit.....
    .....................I AINT PLAY'N bitch,.....................
    ~well are ya gunna do what your actualy sayin shit~...
    still screamin reps lettin yall know what my cadence is...
    Im gettin the greatist lick just gunna punch basic hits...
    that black eye was lucky but now im commin back.....
    Prolly be puntin sack fuck it ill punch his hat, now keep stuntin back...
    This aint football so why ya runnin back, My fists supreme so fuck a gat...
    Keep it quick n probobly go to your house n keep sticken momy...
    This chickans got me, i wont stop untilll u quit picken on me...
    Evidently i came plenty cuz ya moms satisfied....
    Her ass is wide, makin it the complete baddest ride....
    So sorry frankie but i cant belive the stains got out..
    from the blood after i i shot n ya mothers brains popped out...


    just a keystyle.... peace

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  2. February 28th, 2005, 04:23 AM #2
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...30#post2121330

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  3. February 28th, 2005, 04:26 AM #3
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...32#post2121332

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  4. February 28th, 2005, 04:49 AM #4
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    Dat the heat right there whoodae...
    JeeZey'I MUST BE THE BAD GUY IN THIS MOVIE
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  5. February 28th, 2005, 06:47 AM #5
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    nice lookin out ..... but more feedback please

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  6. February 28th, 2005, 08:50 AM #6
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    This was a simple verse. Rhyming was alright. Strayed off what you were freestyling about a bit. Kinda raw type lines.
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  7. February 28th, 2005, 11:07 AM #7
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    This was a decent verse.
    It started off poor but then after 6 bars you started to show your flow more its nice so try to be more consistent with your flow.
    The structure and vocab needs work the story in the rhyme was ok but next time take ya time on your rhymes and you'll get better feed.

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  8. March 1st, 2005, 05:00 AM #8
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    thanx yall.............................................. ............

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  9. March 1st, 2005, 07:33 AM #9
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    hahaha nah not really feeling it aye.. dont like the topic either :E
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  10. March 2nd, 2005, 04:50 AM #10
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    whats ur reasoning?

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