a verse

[black_ceazer]

i was borin in the belly of the beast/the belly is the streets
where u hear guns/ bustin like the beats
or bustin at police/cuz in the booth i only speak the truth
an im a product of the streets/ so its on right i handle heat
an keep it 4 the beef/in case a nigga try to handle me
its always niggas out to get at cease/bcuz he keep it real
an not known to squill/an i'll have ur bitch gone off them xtc pills
she fuckin with a real nigga now/so dude how it feel
to have ur girl fuckin anotha nigga/ im slim but not thug
an im still not a ili nigga/if u creep by my spot
make sure u got a glock/wit a plot
an betta b a good shot/cuz when i pop
its like jordans jumpshot wit the bulls/so u betta think b4 u handle tools

[Jeezey]

Fa Show...Fa show...you did dat..

[black_ceazer]

yea cuz where we go to 2battle at?

[Spit]

its aight....rhyming was there... no vocab wich is a keyfactor in most drops....
i can tell this was just plotted down fast... but its kewl keep droppn peace....
return the favor bro.....hit my open mic up

[Kairos]

Battle in front lines
Work on upping your vocab and your wordplay. You attempted some wordplay, keep that up. The topic was simple, easy to write about. As you keep writing go onto more complex subjects.

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[ljc]

spent half my young life in court got an asualt of every sourt my momz is lookin at me diffrent like im a juvenille delinquint in lock up fo 1 month at the age of 14 almost every day i was in quarentine just spit all the time since age 5 i could kcik a ryhm betta than most i show up on ur block like a ghost takin souls fuck only beutiful girls no trolls specially if they stumoche got juelly rolls say hello to the newest rap sensation everyday of my life is spent at the police satation got everything form arson to assault with a weapon damn i gotta teach theses bitches a lesson with my smith and weston trust son i wont be missin all this and im white fuck it i aint livin up to the slim shady hype shott me btich i hate my life so i grabve the mic and rap about a dike and ur btihc nows i spit it right only 14 but i can hit it right young and bold aint neva bakcin down from a fight one day itll cost em my life