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u spit first due in 1 hour
Young Avalon
man_got_game
10+ lines
u spit first due in 1 hour
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man_got_game huh? but god aint bless em
only game this nigga got is mario and tekken
You couldnt spit fire, if satan touched ya lungs
Bump heads with me, I guarentee ya life done
Whenever I spit lyrics, aint no hoe safe
You got 71 posts but you aint got no weight
Put on my shit on rewind, or instant replay
But a prices on ya head like young buck and d-tay
I keep a glock handy, haters cant stand me
man_got_game more like man_sweet_like_candy
Can yall please please please go and vote on that battle wit hyrbid cypher vs. maniac..how he even got thAt 1 vote is crazy to me..but do dat 4 me and i'll return the favor and vote on dis battle when it pop off....
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Dats all I spit
young Avalon let me give u a messgae//
dis man_got_game he gunna teach u a lesson//
dis game is to big fo a newb like u//
im like ben wallace wen he dunked over ur crew//
i can shoot three pointers just like kyle korver//
i saw ur girl last night she said that u was a whore//
man u just a damn newb and ur waistin my time//
man dis batlle hasn't started dis still primetime//
go battle with some one thats ur size and weight//
i heard some boys callin for u sayin u had good taste//
they also need a date for tomorrow night//
man put the knife down and lets fuckin fight//
this night isn't over yet im still winnin 100-2//
look at the score man give it up i am better than u//
theres still enough tiem on the clock.. theres ten minutes left//
yougin i just dunked on u man u must be deprest//
man thats a shame losein 140-5//
how many points did i beat u bye.um.. 135//
dis battle is over between me and you//
man ima get all the votes cuz u let me beat you//
u stink so bad u made the crowd leave//
man its gettin hot in here maybe 180 degrees//
becuz of me i made the crowd come back//
and now im on fire they don't want u back//
u just a youngin man go battle someone else//
if can't find to beat any1 then just hit yourself
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up'n for some votes people!!!
yo vote people! come on vote!
Vote Niggaz
need some votes to win...
who is gunna vote???????
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The second half of man_got_game's verse was a pretty big letdown. The rhymes got even more simplistic and the punches got even weaker. If MGG had kept things at the level of his first few lines it would be a closer match.
Young Avalon put in a short verse, but even so he had more wordplay and more personal punches than his competitor. A short, focused verse beats a longer one that isn't really going anywhere. I still don't have the 100 posts needed to put in a vote, but that's the way I'd call it. Unofficial vote goes to Young Avalon.
yo avalon u win but plz yall need to vote in dis freestyle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173317
man_got_game huh? but god aint bless em
only game this nigga got is mario and tekken
^^good opener, i liked this
You couldnt spit fire, if satan touched ya lungs
Bump heads with me, I guarentee ya life done
Whenever I spit lyrics, aint no hoe safe
You got 71 posts but you aint got no weight
^^^not bad good word play
Put on my shit on rewind, or instant replay
But a prices on ya head like young buck and d-tay
^^who the fuck is D-tay?
I keep a glock handy, haters cant stand me
man_got_game more like man_sweet_like_candy
^^lol nice decent closer
overall a decent post,,coulda been structured better but eh what can you do
young Avalon let me give u a messgae//
dis man_got_game he gunna teach u a lesson//
dis game is to big fo a newb like u//
im like ben wallace wen he dunked over ur crew//
i can shoot three pointers just like kyle korver//
i saw ur girl last night she said that u was a whore
^^^thats all im gonna post...
overall you need to elevate...the one word rhymes are no good if you got nothing to back em...use some multies, punches, and name play once in a while
keep uppin...
v/young avalon
my vote man gota game win thats it ,thats shit............
what?
man got game just had self glorification and didnt have any punches.
avalon had punches and personals. nuff said.
v/avalon for actually having punches.
Young avalon took this one his rhyme flowed much better than man_got_game
and he had better punchlines also.
if i could vote it would go to Young Avalon
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