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Thread: its the pay back...mc heartless diss

  1. #1
    sick thoughtz
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    Red face its the pay back...mc heartless diss

    sick thoughtz in this bitch whut up im in the building once again and you know ive been catching a lot of vibes on this site already and im going to let yall niggaz know right now YOU AINT FUCKIN WITH THIS,SO SIT BACK LIGHT A SPLIFF PICK A BEAT TO This, BOB YA FUCKIN HEADS AND THINK ABOUT MC HEARTLESS THE WORLDS LARGEST BITCH NIGGGGGGGAAAAAAAA,

    YO ITS THE PAYYYY BACK IM GLAD I DIDNT KNOW THIS NIGGA WAYYY BACK
    HE WOULD OF BEEN HIT WITH THE MACK JUST FOR COMING OUT WITH THOSE GAYYYY RAPS,,,,,,



    i hit his ass up once and never heard back from the nigga/
    i guess it was to much to handle it took all the black out that nigga/
    but yo im not done yet that was just a bum threat/
    i can keep this beef up everyday from sun down to sunset/
    i think this niggaz rhymes need a little boost to it/
    keep replying to my rhymes because your going to get used to it/
    smack athat niggaz grill until his jaws get red as a gobstopper/
    respect me nigga like you was my capo and i was your godfather/
    put that face in a pile of mud while dripping with blood/
    this niggaz still a baby he still play with the suds in his tub/
    always talking about putting a slug in a thug/
    but the other day i heard you got mugged in the club/
    stupid ass nigga dont even have money for a soda/
    mouth running like a motor all the way to minnesota/
    i dissed his ass and every since he shut the fuck up/
    got me thinking did some faggots butt fucked him up like a slut/
    im that sick nigga down with the new world henchmen/
    got you in a line standing at attention/
    put your life on the line or your wife on the line/
    catch a knife to ya spine because i gotta trife mind/
    leave this beef alone and give this nigga respect/
    before you get hit with the tech all up in your neck/
    tell your homeys the jeepers creepers back/
    im not a wrestler but ill put you in that sleeper rack/
    ............
    OK PART 2 OF THE DRAMA WHERE YOU AT YO WHERE YOU AT HOLLA BACK FAGGOT YOU AINT GANGSTA YOU SHUT UP ON MY FIRST DISS BUT THEY CLOSED THAT JOINT AND YOU STILL AINT BLAST BACK GOTCHA SHOOK AS A BITCH WHUT UP LITTLE BITCH COCK SUCKING DIRTY ASS BUM NIGGA ILL EAT YOUR SHIT UP ANYTIME IM PAC MAN AND YOUR THAT PINK GHOST...................................ILL SMASH YOU.....YEA YEA YEA YOU KNOW WHO THIS IS SICK THOUGHTZ IN THE BUILDING FOR THE 20-05 :

  2. #2
    sick thoughtz
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    uppin for replies

  3. #3
    I'm feelin it, keep it up

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    not the greatest structure at all drop these /////.....this really wasnt anything special you should ahve just battled the otha person.........up ya creativity and wittyness come more complex ..........overall its decent

  5. #5
    This was ok, whats with all the disses in OM? Please

    Credz, there really should be a seperate part for shit like this.

    Anyways, the work was good, you had a decent useage of wordplay and some alright punches... Just try to drop the hard man act.

    Ohhh, and your 'uppin for replies' post, it really neglated the whole diss man.

    Anyways, peep mine
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168569

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    Rock you in the Face Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic's Avatar
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    Ahh... its alright, nothing truely special, you just need to up on the punchlines, they were weak
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
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    Just watch My Back, I got the front.

  7. #7
    Yo Yo

    My thoughts on Sick thoughtz, you should quit smokin dicks, and lick twats, this shits hot so let me make it a little hotter.
    Its 98 degrees in here slipin through your daughter, get the Ice water someones needs to cool you down, and throw this jerzey faggot outa Dr. Buddahs town.
    Dressed in your nightgown you lookin so sleazy, man I never said dying of AIDS would be real easy.
    Ok!!! OK!!! Ill give you my prescription... Hurry call 911, and give out this niggas description!!! My words are encryptions that just can't be broke.
    Yo computer nerd from jerzey just done up and choked.

    Buddahs so crazy, and Sicks been clowned, bitch log the fuck out a new kings been crowned. Now I know this hurts, but I aint done yet, just don't forget her tags tommorrow before I pick your mom up from the vet.

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    No. You left some shitty feedback and no links to boot.

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