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  1. January 15th, 2005, 01:45 PM #1
    disputid
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    I'm the rapper

    I'm the rapper

    As u can see the new rapper is here with no fear
    My lyrics is real it as a touch as it feels
    The way i do it no rappers could see
    In a battle they will always flee
    They don't wanna fuck with me
    From an x-ray they can't say how the fuck did i join Dr.Dre
    This is was a play not truth ok
    Lets finish this shit today
    Look i have DMC's handgun bitch u aint got none
    So you better get my fucking refund and drop
    Or u can run and get shot my aim is still pointing at u
    your the person to lose a fight in a red light
    Dispite the fact you people suck
    Let me just give u some people some pointers
    before u people get fucked
    Go some where write some shit down
    untill your in your own bound
    Feeling depressed will get me arrest
    Thats all I got for you dumbfucks
    My rap is through i finally got u *shot*

    I no it sucks but i'm new here but can u belive watching 8 mile got me inspired to rap. well i rapped before 2 then i quit now i'm back again
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  2. January 15th, 2005, 02:05 PM #2
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    zzzzzzzzzz....oh sorry musta fallin asleep....yea kinda what u expect of someone who's just startin'...keep workin'...I'm trashed lol...pz
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  3. January 15th, 2005, 03:10 PM #3
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    its ight...........straight for a beginner................keep it up......................
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  4. January 15th, 2005, 03:47 PM #4
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    um i wish eybody would realize..the gift of puttin words together and freestylin is a talent from god everyone is not blessed with...find ya blessin man..lol nah i mean what can i say you tryed to throw in a lil creativity but it didnt work try to grab one concept or idea and flow with that,the structure was all bad the vocab....you need some work browse and take notes...aight one

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  5. January 15th, 2005, 03:59 PM #5
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    nice attempt , but u need more practice
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  6. January 15th, 2005, 04:07 PM #6
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    it took me 10 to 15 min i'll try harder next time. next i'll use a beat to get me flowin and get me goin . thx for the feed
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  7. January 15th, 2005, 04:43 PM #7
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    You had a couple ideas going. Try and stay on topic more. Check out the help section for tips on getting better Keep posting.
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  8. January 15th, 2005, 07:39 PM #8
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    it seemed like a filler rhyme.. like you were just saying stuff to rhyme without any main point or focus, like a freestyle but freestyles don't exist online man. Better you topic
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  9. January 16th, 2005, 08:38 AM #9
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    ya I'm better at freestyle
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  10. January 16th, 2005, 09:34 AM #10
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    nice starter peice, keep working at it
    i looks like you have the right eyedea, but need to work on the rhymes and wordplay
    stay up
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  11. January 16th, 2005, 09:37 AM #11
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    You need 2 work on ya structure and flow.
    wasnt bad 4 a first go.
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  12. January 16th, 2005, 09:44 AM #12
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    8 mile type stuff, pretty cool tho, keep elavating and you'll get there.
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  13. January 16th, 2005, 09:51 AM #13
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    ^take no notice of him

    Look if your new and you know you suck don't post Open mics about "I'm a new rapper." Even if you're a dope tocial head (which you're not) the chances are it'll suck. Get a creative an interesting topic going and think to yourself "are these people going to enjoy reading it?" before posting.

    Read vets open mics and then post your own, chances are you'll get better.]

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