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    Advice for Mr. Mathers...

    The beat in my head is Mockingbird, from Encore…

    I’m not tryin ta act like Stan, I’m not that kinda man…
    I just wanna drop some thoughts that I hope you understand.
    See, we both off in our thirties, little girl is our world…
    And I know that kinda love can set ya world a whirl-ing.
    But, the thing, I’m trying ta say to you is…
    All that rapping bout your Kim has gotten way past stupid.
    I know Cupid did you wrong, we’ve heard all the fuckin songs…
    But we never thought your whining would last this fuckin long.
    Get yourself another topic, the Kim shit, please just drop it…
    And quit making songs that portray ya skill as microscopic.
    A lotta cats on this site, they just think you’ve lost it…
    They liked you so much more when you were Cleaning Out Your Closet.
    So like a locket, just picture her close to ya heart…
    But go on to a new life, please hurry up and start.
    Damn, man, grow some fucking balls…
    We know the pussy you can cop could fill one of your concert halls.
    So, Em, dude…just pick the best of the bunch…
    And have that bitch show you love like its Valentine’s every month.
    That oughta help you get back, to where ya oughta be…
    Inspiring kids to drop a track and spill their heart lyrically.
    See, I’m not saying, toss all your fun off in the shredder…
    But we liked The Way You Were a whole lot fuckin better.
    That’s why Encore got no encores, cept for your Toy Soldiers…
    But you know and I know the only war’s above ya shoulders.
    Ain’t no one dying in the streets, for repping Aftermath…
    You’re just glorifying beef, that ain’t really all that bad.
    Yeah sure, Dre took a shot to the jaw…
    But now Buck’s dumbass is in trouble with the law.
    And why? For what? Cuz respect wasn’t shown?
    Or did he think that Doc Dre just couldn’t hold his own?
    It’s old…been sold, now I want a refund for that shit…
    And I’m not talking dollars, Em, I want renewed commitment.
    From you, to get ya ass back to the pad…
    And show your fans the drive that you once so clearly had.
    Fag! Is prolly what I’ll hear from kids…
    Who’ll think I’m prolly hoping to attract ya fuckin dick.
    Whatever…I’m just speaking one guy to another…
    Close ages, similar phases, and both of us have daughters.


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    yo man thats real shit em should deffinently go back to rappin they way he did before cuz he really fell off and i liked how you related him to you that was a good peice and real.

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    thats some tru shit homie, em needs ta get that bitch off his brain, everyone knos bout kim bla, bla, bla. its time for that shit ta end, good view of it pimpin.one love.

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    This was a good plea and statement BTK....

    Good job weaving in personal issues....I can see your point of view in this piece....and I agree...Encore wasn't as good as his earlier stuff....it seems as tho he dropped the good shit early to get his carer started...and once he got that, he started slacking....anyway...I dunno what to critique in this...it was a good messgae and a good argument...


    peep if you have time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=164622
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    Sounded good in my head w/ the Mockingbird beat.. good thoughts man.. you basically spoke for everyone here.. Em does need to go back to his old self.. I loved how you connected w/ him on a personal level.. ages almost the same, n' you both got daughters.. that's real shit.. this was all too real.. had some nice lines too..

    Get yourself another topic, the Kim shit, please just drop it…
    And quit making songs that portray ya skill as microscopic.
    A lotta cats on this site, they just think you’ve lost it…
    They liked you so much more when you were Cleaning Out Your Closet.
    So like a locket, just picture her close to ya heart…
    But go on to a new life, please hurry up and start.
    Damn, man, grow some fucking balls…
    We know the pussy you can cop could fill one of your concert halls.
    So, Em, dude…just pick the best of the bunch…
    And have that bitch show you love like its Valentine’s every month.
    ^ flow was butter.. n' the emotion was nice.. everything was good.

    It’s old…been sold, now I want a refund for that shit…
    And I’m not talking dollars, Em, I want renewed commitment.
    ^ word.. me too.

    Good piece BTK.. nobody should hate on it, it's your freedom of expression n' shit, you know.. -Check Out 'My Girl 'Til The End' ..Appreciate it- Pz.

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    Didnt like it. 30 years young and your rapping about Eminem...

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    It just knew some immature piece of fuck would say something negative...

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    good work Born, interesting read, and different from the stuff i normally look at... very opinionated, which i like in writing...

    so is sirusx a fan of yours then?
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    BTK nice drop as usual with you my friend...
    Holy Shit!, You say? Yes, It's me replying to your
    topical (the first time in a long time. [cauz I was
    gone.])

    I see where your coming from with the similarities
    and the fact that his new album sucks...the 3 songs
    on the Bonus track are worth more of my easily
    earned christmas cash than his actual album.
    Mocking Bird beat would go very good with this as an
    audio.

    Nice job and

    tlak about immature he didn't even give
    you any fucking feed back...what an E-Whore...

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    fergot to let you know to chekc out my OM
    it's

    What the Problem Is?

    sorry for no link if you could
    please just look for it, I'm pretty
    sure it's on one of the first two
    pages...thanks BTK!

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    sorry born, ive seen you progress, i remember you usta be like 24-60 or some shit..
    no hate, just speakn my peice.

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    thats some tight shit, and true to...i liked how u comapred him to urself and ur flow was dead on, and yea that would sound tight with the mocking bird beat...

    Yeah sure, Dre took a shot to the jaw…
    But now Buck’s dumbass is in trouble with the law.
    And why? For what? Cuz respect wasn’t shown?
    Or did he think that Doc Dre just couldn’t hold his own?
    ^^^i liked that line, i liked a lot more to just dont feel like looking for em lol

    Overall- Sick Drop...

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    tight as usuall .....i thought it was really good how u related to him its really true what u said. As well how anoyin it is 2 here all these stupid songs about kim and puke that was the worst song iv ever herd . any way real nice drop awsome vocab the flow was good strucutre also good . i really liked the topic as well very cleva props man
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    this was quite nice, and you didnt really run him down
    tho i can remember a time when you were affraid to write about EM altogether
    like when you closed this thread
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=144492
    but yeah, nice verse aye, got the beat in my head too

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    pretty coo i found it entertaining for the most part

    good wordplay

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