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Thread: My Magic Stick Remix (Part 1)

  1. December 21st, 2004, 11:58 PM #1
    Civilized Gangsta
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    My Magic Stick Remix (Part 1)

    Tragic Shit

    I been through some tragic shit
    I can tell you once, I can tell ya twice
    I been through some tragic shit
    There isnt words to describe the shit i been through
    I been through so much tragic
    (what what) Tragic (uh huh uh huh)
    I been through some tragic shit

    In jail at 13 years ol (old)
    Lost both parents, didnt have one to hold
    Got out 3 monthz later, and my sis a traitor
    She told the copz, and she wonders why i hate er
    I had her up all eve-nin, cheezin
    She never knew the goals i was seizin
    Seein the best, and In jail bleedin to death
    5 months in treatment and still needin the meth
    Went to mary jane, life still very plain
    Saved it up, then straight gave it up
    Then started coke, from there i began showin
    How hard life is; without you even knowin
    Got expelled from school,I barely came back
    Got around old friends, and now im on the very same track
    I talk alot of shit, but its all facts
    Ya best lies just left mine

    I been through some tragic shit
    I can tell you once, I can tell ya twice
    I been through some tragic shit
    There isnt words to describe the shit i been through
    I been through so much tragic
    (what what) Tragic (uh huh uh huh)
    I been through some tragic shit



    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161441

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...74#post1924674
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  2. December 22nd, 2004, 12:11 AM #2
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    uppin....just leave links..i will return the favor....
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  3. December 22nd, 2004, 12:12 AM #3
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    Had A Slight Eminem Vibe And Flow Pattern This Wasnt Bad The Hook Im Not Much On But Other Then That U Have A Nice Talent
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  4. December 22nd, 2004, 12:16 AM #4
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    ^thanks..uppin this..
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  5. December 22nd, 2004, 12:30 AM #5
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    ........come on...just leave links..i will return the feed...
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  6. December 22nd, 2004, 12:42 AM #6
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    Thumbs up

    Yeah u got a different style but that's good. This worked for me keep it up man u got somethin here just keep posting and such!

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  7. December 22nd, 2004, 05:23 AM #7
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    yo, you should record this
    Yours Sincerely,

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  8. December 22nd, 2004, 05:33 AM #8
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    I was really feelin' this piece yo. Had good flow, good content, good structure.. it was an enjoyable read. WORD~PERFECT, you're an idiot for saying it had an Eminem vibe to it, seriously. Anyway, lol, yeah.. this really was a quality drop from you C.R. N' for real, you should think about droppin' another verse or two on this, to make it a full song.. your choice.. pz.
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  9. December 22nd, 2004, 05:50 AM #9
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    nice drop... i agree wit wat ^^ said... deep emotional, vocab wasnt too great but it flowed perfect wit this piece good shit

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  10. December 22nd, 2004, 07:51 AM #10
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    i thought it was good piece and i agree with emcee steve you should record it

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  11. December 22nd, 2004, 08:00 AM #11
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    yeah, the shit would be tight to the beat. somehow the chorus didn't match up, but the lyrics were tight. i'd like to see maybe another verse too, you had somethin there. hit me back at:

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  12. December 22nd, 2004, 10:24 AM #12
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    wow thanks for all the positive feed...and i will write 2 more verses for this...so dont worry about that lol..i prolly will record it but i am havin trouble with finding the instrumental..so if anyone knows how to get it..make sure to tell me..pz
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  13. December 22nd, 2004, 10:38 AM #13
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    that shit was deep...i was feelin' that..keep postin'
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  14. December 22nd, 2004, 11:22 AM #14
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  15. December 22nd, 2004, 11:24 AM #15
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    very nice, as i said befor

    Hurry up and record this!!!

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