house rules:
no biting
no feeding
10-20 lines
no dickriding votes
no hate votes
no crew votes
you got 24 hrs after checkin to drop ya verse
house rules:
no biting
no feeding
10-20 lines
no dickriding votes
no hate votes
no crew votes
you got 24 hrs after checkin to drop ya verse
its time to take you out quick
they call you right hand man coz its the only thing that touches your dick
you wanna battle me that was wrong
i had your mother sucking my dick all night long
im too hardcore, to what youve ever seen
i can smell your breath through the pc that means you need listerine
i can freestyle till you fall apart
coz you just another retard
im burning like a blunt thats just been lit
with one rhyme i"ll leave you in the intensive care unit
you wanna call yourself a rapper
but in this world you dont even matter,
man this aint no gay singers recital
you so whack you even got kicked off pop idol
the force of living is pussy like a newborn kitten..
a drag queen model who only spit when dicks get his lip gloss missing..
your verse is garbage you gotta come better than that..
the only way you would be hot is if i set flame to your track..
you would never be in the limelight if you think you sound hype..
you couldn't beat me if i was a midget with no arms who couldn't fight..
your the living force of what a.k.a focus on shit..
i would never be in your view like ray charles seeing a bitch..
my moms? and your mother is a nasty lil smut..
she cut the string off her tampon so the crabs don't bungee jump..
uppin #1
uppin #2
uppin #3
plz vote this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
uppin #4
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!
that shit was just fire. sorry to say but livingforce was kinda whack.
"i can freestyle till you fall apart
coz you just another retard"
These lines were so corny, i felt bad, compare that to:
"the force of living is pussy like a newborn kitten..
a drag queen model who only spit when dicks get his lip gloss missing.."
and
"you would never be in the limelight if you think you sound hype..
you couldn't beat me if i was a midget with no arms who couldn't fight.."
My vote goes to Right_Hand keep doing ya thing boo.
This be a chick, Buckz_Bytch. Holla at cha gurl.
yo right hand took this by far......living force came on with some wack ass lines....you need 2 elevate son..... right hand had some good pairs ( liked the set up ) ....some good personal ...... my vote obviously goes to right hand ..... drop a vote in my battle vs puffngive....peace out....wordlife
right hand i agree wid heartless you totally win this better punches betta structure n you made me laugh wid the punches to my vote goes to u !!! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161468
give me feed bak in my battle against mc longtingz plz
I must Agree, Living force you have alot of elevation to do.. try thinkin' of something Obvious about your opponent & drop lines on that.. like His Avatar, his siggy, his name. But they have to really be disses for them to have any effect in a battle.
Also try to start using Similies IE: "Your like.. You spit like" & make them make sense. That should get you on your way to the next level early..
Vote=Right hand
Just an overall better verse..
p.s
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Both had good structure but living had better flow and punches.
right work on the disses, needa come at ya opponent harder.
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