no dr
no cv
reason's for your vote
10-16 lines
you drop 1st
spit when your ready
mc longtingz
jay uu
no dr
no cv
reason's for your vote
10-16 lines
you drop 1st
spit when your ready
you there man no rush drop when u want but r u in dis house nigger??
yo soz man soz had to go out and sort somthing ill drop now
Took a while im still sorting shit out lol
Ya couldnt spit shit if u licked my asshole clean/
Dont go together like too much mud in a washing machine/
Too fat so when joe told ya too lean back/
Fell down the stairs, smack, split yo ass crack/
U acts a mimic so when u spit wiv a lisp its just a slur/
Couldnt be original if you were christened *worther*/(worthers originals)
Cant comeback or even read this plane simple ur just dislexic/
Whats with the attention fag go suck some body elses dick/
Wanna be jigga man talking about pulling triggas ,man/(jay uu = z)
Gangstar talk dont cut it cus im causing more damage with a frying pan/
Remove your vocal chords so only blood comes from an E note/
Like ur act couldnt promote dick to the navy on a battle boat/
16 line limit what is this your *potential zone*/
Speed right through leave yo ass as road kill on my way home/
yo yo yo,
Ima open up a can of woop ass with rumblin' shocks,
evil will overflow like opening pendora's box,
with large rocks, blocks, amma fucking rolling boulder,
you can't withstand me spitting am cracking up ya shoulder
not the type thats older,
i don't like fake ass pricks ass crack, n am young and fully in me prime,
ama motherfuckin' machine designed just to rhyme,
with lyrics so descriptive they paint a clear picture to blinds,
i here ya mumma's a teacher i fucked her so hard she gave me lines
and my dick exploded like a glock nine,
ripping up your insides like a guerrilla landmine,
but still fine like the curved lines of lady's behind,
you just wish you could fuck this,
but no you cant,you just Miss,
your wack ass attempt doesn't even exist,
you remain a conscience of pure reminiscence,
buried underneath your own rhymin' abyss,
you all must resist and make sure you don't piss me off,
I'll reveal how soft the punchlines you waft,
am a big tough mc like fuckin' samuel in shaft
but lightly gets tossed and easily intercepted,
you'll have to spit better shit to get accepted,
with a mind that's lucid,
but toxic like acid,
the great maverick with the superior status,
above average lyricism transferred through this apparatus,
any MC steppin' in my direction leaves embarrassed,
I take advantage of my talent,
only leavin' wack cats in this game like you for my balance
yo good spittin
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good rhymes doggOriginally Posted by jay uu
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Who ya talkin 2 lol bare on confused
neway
Uppin this for votes
peace
this was a good battle ..... hard to chose between the two ....... jay uu used some dope vocab...good personals...good imagery..... but im into openers and finishers and mc longtingz takes it there so my vote goes to mc longtingz .....yo you two should have a rematch.....
thanks for the vote although it was a bad choice lol only messin
Comone people this is a hot battle
looking for votes
innit up the votin please guys......................
can we hav sum votes 4 this shit its a gud battle uppin da votes please!!
MC Longtingz
Ya couldnt spit shit if u licked my asshole clean/
Dont go together like too much mud in a washing machine/
ehhh...
Too fat so when joe told ya too lean back/
Fell down the stairs, smack, split yo ass crack/
lol, weak, but funny never-the-less..
U acts a mimic so when u spit wiv a lisp its just a slur/
Couldnt be original if you were christened *worther*/(worthers originals)
ehhh.. good try tho..
Cant comeback or even read this plane simple ur just dislexic/
Whats with the attention fag go suck some body elses dick/
Filler...
Wanna be jigga man talking about pulling triggas ,man/(jay uu = z)
Gangstar talk dont cut it cus im causing more damage with a frying pan/
Ehh.. should've followed up in the Jay-Z name diss..
Remove your vocal chords so only blood comes from an E note/
Like ur act couldnt promote dick to the navy on a battle boat/
boo..
16 line limit what is this your *potential zone*/
Speed right through leave yo ass as road kill on my way home/
Ehh closer..
JAY
Ima open up a can of woop ass with rumblin' shocks,
evil will overflow like opening pendora's box,
ok..
with large rocks, blocks, amma fucking rolling boulder,
you can't withstand me spitting am cracking up ya shoulder
not the type thats older,
i don't like fake ass pricks ass crack, n am young and fully in me prime,
ama motherfuckin' machine designed just to rhyme,
with lyrics so descriptive they paint a clear picture to blinds,
Your supposed to insult your opponent in a battle, not Brag about yourself
i here ya mumma's a teacher i fucked her so hard she gave me lines
and my dick exploded like a glock nine,
ripping up your insides like a guerrilla landmine,
but still fine like the curved lines of lady's behind,
Boo.. you got the handle of similies.. now figure out how to insult you opponent with them
you just wish you could fuck this,
but no you cant,you just Miss,
your wack ass attempt doesn't even exist,
you remain a conscience of pure reminiscence,
buried underneath your own rhymin' abyss,
Filler, filler, filler.. your just ryhming for the sake of ryhming
you all must resist and make sure you don't piss me off,
I'll reveal how soft the punchlines you waft,
am a big tough mc like fuckin' samuel in shaft
Braggin' again?
but lightly gets tossed and easily intercepted,
you'll have to spit better shit to get accepted,
Fillers again..
with a mind that's lucid,
but toxic like acid,
the great maverick with the superior status,
above average lyricism transferred through this apparatus,
any MC steppin' in my direction leaves embarrassed,
I take advantage of my talent,
only leavin' wack cats in this game like you for my balance
Boo... You need to learn the differance between Freetyle battle & Freestyle open mic
Vote=Long Ting
Just a overall more insulting verse, he did more damage then Jay. Jay Just posted Self Glorification ryhmes & well.. they aren't needed in battles.
Jay re-read the note I left & apply them to your next battles.. Keep Elevatin'
oNe
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k thanks for your vote althou he got it thanks man ill read n shuve it in mind 4 my nxt battle much love
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