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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    incase you forgot im here

    My thoughts measure like polygraphs to liars/
    I write the gosphel, while you preach to the quiar/
    A different level/made in gods image /
    But when I battle or scrimmage/the tremble/
    speaks in flames like I was jesus in the desert with the devil.
    and fuck being committed/ to being ill I wont settle/
    till my spits not just sick but acidic.
    Colossal vocab my spits battle hydrens/
    Violins/ remix my song with violence/ and sirens.
    Im like stop signs…made for the street/
    put my heart into this rap shit and forever stay on beat.
    I regurgitate/ on cd and piss on tapes/
    Defocate/ on vynils like I had an mp3 for a prostate.
    My quotes spokes/choke throats/
    A contradiction like homeless gamblers going for broke.
    Make your bitch wet turn her panties into a moat/
    to the point when u eat her out you end up soaked.
    Im besten/ injestin/ emcees then digestin/fuck with me?
    I’ll Leave you ass out like you crossed your large and small intestin.
    And im only adressen/ those who’s cd’s is best herd eject~in.
    Nigguz that couldn’t come hard with an elephants erection.
    My intensions- are loco-and reflect in my writs/my scripts/
    Stay Molestin- your vocals- like I forced you to swallow dick.
    Hollow tip/echoes the illest rhymes busted when the dick head spits.
    No wonder I rhyme cocky/punch lines like rocky/
    Make your career end BRIEF like I was promoted by JOCKEYS.
    And I wish my life wasn’t a simile for survival/
    But lifes a bitch and destineys a metaphor like the bible.
    If you take that literally then take me literal/
    And if im critically acclaimed then that means I can leave you in ctitical.

    All I need is 10 mins with PBK and SEMINOLE if I want to rip a holes.
    20 with DJB and PSYKOSIS to leave you with mutiple scoliosos.
    And 6 FEET to find a place to burry you after I put you to sleep.

    So why remain discreat? The world already knows what to expect from me/
    But what they didn’t expect is HIT N RUN to be an infantry…
    With lyrical depth and flow density/ in every bar/
    So basically this one crew could drop an album and irrigate mars.
    And I can tell you to eat a dick/but don’t mistake that for fag shit/don’t push me….
    I been through your whole click/ heterosexually I’m not afraid to eat pussy/
    Been fucked you to many times so when I say your tight I use the term loosely.
    A lot of you asking will I ti pass the test of time/
    Lets see 3 yrs 3 000 songs and I just maxed and 20 minute rhyme.
    And still battle thermometers/ whil you couldn’t spit a straight line
    If you turned off a heart monitor..
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    SoNiK
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    Wow... Very fuckin' nice homie...

    the beginning was kind of slow, but once you got about 6 lines in, it just started to upscale... On audio this track would kill... A lot of the bars had mixed play but if you read it like you would spit it, that shit's crystal clear

    Favorite lines:
    I regurgitate/ on cd and piss on tapes/
    Defocate/ on vynils like I had an mp3 for a prostate.
    I been through your whole click/ heterosexually I’m not afraid to eat pussy/
    Been fucked you to many times so when I say your tight I use the term loosely

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    thank you
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Ruffrida
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    damn that shit is ill you a good rapper <All I need is 10 mins with PBK and SEMINOLE if I want to rip a holes.
    20 with DJB and PSYKOSIS to leave you with mutiple scoliosos.
    And 6 FEET to find a place to burry you after I put you to sleep.> that shit was good man

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    Ink Thesis
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    This was really good. I'll be on the lookout for more of your stuff. I liked the wordplay in this. Metaphors were cool. Everything else was nice. Your style's unique, I liked this shit alot. Flow was really good. It was creative at parts, etc.

    Keep it up.

    And please hit this up:

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160309

    Peace

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    yeah this was a tight post, you switched ya flow up every few bars so it didnt get repetitive, ya metaphors were good and animated. tight.
    reply 2 my new post if u got the time.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160700

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    uppin and i will peep ur ish
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Ink Thesis
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    Yo Word, hit that link up.

    Thanks.

    Peace

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    hey man, this was some very, very, very..............................VERY good shit yo. this is some of the best i've seen on open mic. very good structure, flow and imagery. it had good imagery, vocab and everything.

    keep it up...peace

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    thanks for the locve twin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    man, the more i read ur stuff the more i like it. there was one or two lines that didn't seem to fit the flow, but they were quickly forgotten as i moved on. damn son, keep that shit up. and everyone else hit me up at:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161313

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    Interesting read.
    Message was nice
    Flow was solid
    and just interesting throughout.
    Nice drop


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...19#post1921819


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