Free Style

[Young#1]

Yea my flows hit hard they come at you way vicious~
This is mo then a flow let me tell you what this is~
they act hard to your back to your face they some bitches~
can you think of enything thit hits harder then disses~


Haterz be hard to get rid of they sort of like symptoms
and if you do one thing wrong well boi you just fucked up
they studdy looking at people but no there not stalkers
they look fo a while then they turn into some talkers
they going to keep talking shit but soon they gana catch one
so they better stop talking befor they get smacked son
i'ma shorty that don't take shit from no one
people push me the wrong way and thay gana get showed up
I got the weight of the world thats enough on my shold~a
think shit is sweet but I respond like a sold~ja


VOTE:

DeE 201 vs Young#1

nonesuch vs Young#1

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[tonguetwista]

uh this was ight...it had good structure, weak in vocabulary and wording though. just keep elevatin and posting

[warchild]

this piece was a bit short, it was average, structure was good but the rhymes were average thats all i could really say.
return the favour reply to my new post
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161055

[Streetcredz]

jus work on it and u will do fine much love keep rhymin holla

[Predatorian]

nnnnn...okay, not great but okay.... A lot of used topics and rhymes but it was okay

[Young#1]

Thanxs fo da feedbacks up fo mo!

[ssinnerisback]

I like it... rhyming was inconsistent, but keep elevatin your good

[bloods]

dis is iight need 2 elevate more but beside dat u did a good job

[Young#1]

up fo mo!

[J Spark]

A man if that was freestyle then it was good. I've been practicin' my freestyle so go check mine out, it's called Common.

[Ace the Prophet]

as pretty much everyone else has said it was aight. good for a freestyle but otherwise nothin special. like they said, overused rhymes, played out topics, etc. wonder what a written piece from you would look like....

return the favor: Mess of Death

[Omniscient]

Yo this was good for a freestyle...had some nice vocab and rhymes in it...good structure...i like da first bar da most....keep it up dogg

[Young#1]

thanxs! ACE I don't do that much pen and paper shit but i'll get at that iight! Up fo mo!

[Predatorian]

it was normal... not great but then again not bad... you could a few battle with that shit