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Thread: stop the violence pt 1&2

  1. December 14th, 2004, 02:55 PM #1
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    Post stop the violence

    my first part :
    we need to come up with some sort of ceasefire.
    If it was an East Coast/West Coast or not
    too many soljas on tha street gettin shot
    we need to put a stop to this before it gets out of hand
    stop this shit for your childrens furure try to understand
    put away dem gats , that shit is for dirty rats
    muhfuckerz from the gutter who be usin dem baseballbats
    dont start killin the streetz , walk straight on your feet
    follow the right path , give space for our children to breathe
    nomore violence its guidin u straight to your grave
    it aint bout surviving anymore , its bout being weak or be brave
    we keepin the youngsta's inside
    in times like this its just better to hide
    playgrounds turned into battlegrounds
    imagin for yaself how a gunshot sounds
    errything turns black in front of dem eyes
    try to say sumthin to his parents before he dies
    another youngsta left his beloved ones
    ya finally earned the respect but now u gone
    family of dem who has fallen already
    we cauzin pain dont y'all get it
    family of the fallen ones keep sayin " for once put ya sets away "
    make sure there aint gone be another death today
    can we please have a moment of silence
    the lord took u under his guidence
    new paths for u to cross
    parents keep morning bout ur loss

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160014
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=158374
    Last edited by street_Rydah; December 16th, 2004 at 03:30 PM

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  2. December 14th, 2004, 03:05 PM #2
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    uppin'
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  3. December 14th, 2004, 05:16 PM #3
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    ayo after 2months i try to write sumtin agen
    drop sum FEEDBACK IN HERE
    tell me what y'all think
    i wrote the first one few months ago
    but read dem both
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  4. December 14th, 2004, 05:44 PM #4
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    its str8 i mean its real cool how some one can make something inspireing like to bring world peace and shit. i wish muh fuckaz would stop sleeping but yo i just wanna say good shit
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  5. December 14th, 2004, 08:52 PM #5
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    i agree if it inspires it definetly was coneyed in the proper way of fusing a message and talent
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  6. December 15th, 2004, 12:15 PM #6
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    ty for the feedback bruh'z
    appreciate it
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    this to the rest y'all.......... read & drop FEEDBACK
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  7. December 15th, 2004, 01:09 PM #7
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    Was def feeling this drop...concept was ill, camre straight from the heart and you kept it down to earth, not to many big shot words...just telling what's going on...bold n pure...Nice drop for sure!

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  8. December 15th, 2004, 01:51 PM #8
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    yo miss jess
    ty for da feedback
    i kno it aint all gd

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  9. December 15th, 2004, 02:10 PM #9
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    You got major potential. This had alot of nice lines, but they weren't worded properly. Probably because of poor vocab. or grammar, but that doesn't matter though. I felt what you were trying to say, deep emotion, and a deep look at the topic. It would've been better if it was longer, and worded properly. But the whole idea & concept of your drop was decent.

    Please hit this up:

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160309

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  10. December 15th, 2004, 02:37 PM #10
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    i kno my vocab could be better
    ty for the feedback bruh
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  11. December 16th, 2004, 11:42 AM #11
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  12. December 17th, 2004, 12:15 PM #12
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  13. December 17th, 2004, 12:34 PM #13
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    this was a good subject rhyme, nice 2 see someone who aint afraid 2 say what he thinks, most of the mc's on here just talk about how they gangsta's and there still getting tucked in at night ha ha. this was tight tight tight.
    return the favour and reply 2 my last post
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160700
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  14. December 17th, 2004, 01:16 PM #14
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  15. December 17th, 2004, 06:37 PM #15
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    you do have a basic vocab as far as intensifying your vocab look in a thesaurus find synonymns for your comnmon words alot of times using a dif word for same meaning adds creativety.....also though i understand the topic you did bounce alot from message to message u have to blend not bounce...this was a well thought idea non the less.and you put some hard concepts into it vocab also sounds better with multis which im juts learning maybe that will help.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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