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    Oil Slick (Story Time)

    Here we go...

    once upon a time not long ago
    when Afghanis were starving and lived life poor
    when laws were firm and Taliban would kill..
    communists for America's pride and armoured will
    there lived a bearded man that was misled by another government
    this is what they said...
    "US, and you Osamawe gonna create some blasts...
    "make some cash cause earthquakes for land"
    he did the job, the Russians off and left
    but the killings never stopped, Kalashnikovs to the heads
    they killed one another and another took sisters and covered them
    America's destruction through cultural trust and governance
    the states grtabbed his bombs, acted no better
    PNAC God activate all terror
    luncheons for ready wars while tracing the map
    Collen Powell's in a morgue trapped on base in Iraq
    Saddam's pulled card,said i got bombs just you wait
    Islam was a new target,arms aimed at Kuwait
    the states got prepared,the chain started a planned trigger
    to stereotype Muslims and Arabs to sand niggers
    they bombed Afghanistan and raided Iraq twice
    imperialism returns as we burn and lost life
    they ran by Iran,and threatened the Shi'is
    you're weapons wont reach me
    i bet yall can see me,
    the war is now at end and they lied to most
    no WMDs in the spider hole
    troubles you went deep and you came with death
    killing masses added to Qusay's in flesh
    it's funny to me you took down your own creation....
    for money to see around the oil in nature
    i see a foiled caper
    so for now i'm blaming them
    for 70 tons of Depleted Uranium
    and the next generation will be dying at birth
    forget the human race seems like we're lying to Earth
    Republicans mumbling this is " peace, world democracy"
    well, i dont believe in a three world theocracy
    Novo Ordus Seclorum, thats my concern
    giant bird at pyrimads, one eye will burn
    its 2000 the 4th, 9/11, dying climbed and thousands are lost
    none escaped alive from New York to Basra
    we all hate to die, of course you not us
    i predict something huge, i'm hesitant to question it
    Bin Laden captured as the president i re-elected in Office...lessons...
    are devout in the Christian vote in Floor'ida like questioning grounds in Egyptian
    the republic is strong again, but something's wrong with men
    fear of the best lost Syria's next
    see we cant laugh at this people
    Bush angled at the axis of evil...
    deep in his heart the truth clears he's wrong
    but who cares he's got all the nuclear bombs
    so, the sirens sounded, and the violence mounted
    the Antichrist appeared at the highest mountian
    they dropped nukes,everywhere simultaneous, the end is here this is the final phase
    we live, the truth hurts gone like failed Dre proteges
    i hope we dont see the day we're all erased
    children read the truth and stay in class KNOW the system
    let your minds glow with the wisdom
    now,this aint funny but i know you're gonna laugh
    another case of civilizations gone bad
    Ladies and Gentlemen this is the end of times
    friend of mine sentenced and desensitized
    sent to die burning radiation to ashes
    as the Earth is lying shaken away from its axis

    And that's the end of the story...

    Good Night

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    uppin.....

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    you have alot of whymes i feel are qoutable and added the right umph to this work i like it alot i give this love
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    thanks duke...you know i feel the same way about your rhymes them shits is hot like curry excrement...good looking duke...one

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    uppin............

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    i think you gotta lotta good rhymes....it was nice n lengthy. structure was pretty weak...i think structure is big, it makes and breaks the flow and the rhyme atleast i think....peace

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    thanks for the feedback duke...one

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