Illness Defined

[Jai-Cee]

The Many Faces of My Soul – By Twixn…

Jailed :New: - By TheReinvention…

Illness Defined

A virus or simple bacteria that are getting me dejected…
Body has rejected the microbes that have got me infected…
Infested with sickness, illness defines my placid state…
Rancid fate, whilst I cough and vomit what my body ate…
Courageous, but I’m contagious so I stay confined to bed…
Lying in a cesspit, with nil by mouth and a stuffy head…
Wish I was dead; this mortal life seems hard with frailty…
It aint even terminal infirmity but even aspirin can’t ail me…
Weakness prevails me, and I take a turn for the worse…
I need immediate medical attention, someone send a nurse…
Call emergency services, this is more than a humble cold…
I’ve been infected by something that needs to be resolved…
Bold in the face of adversity as I’m rushed to a hospital…
Suffering hallucinations seeing me vatic as an ill oracle…
Probable cause of infection from something inexplicable…
Doctors pondered about my welfare, until I turned critical…
Vital signs declining defining this terrible unknown illness…
I was an emcee that was suffering from acute verbal brilliance…

Hahaha… love it…

Just a quick keystyle which made me laugh the more I wrote…

w00t!!

[sNoopfox]

hah sweet man, its comical how u've made a cold seem so serious good flow, not to your usual depth of language but this made it easier to read and get to the point...
keep it real.

[Jai-Cee]

Hup...

[Jai-Cee]

anyone...?

[Jay Mel]

Pretty good maine, lookin 4 some moe shit of yours



6/10

[Chronic Cancer]

good, i like it but could have been better, well........ 6.5/10..........

[Jai-Cee]

upin

[Interpersonal]

ok this was nice for a keystyle...i like the fact that you stayed on topic a lot of kats dont usually...your wordplay and structuring was nice...got to admit the multies was nice but i was wishing you would throw some more in there...but overall i think this was nice for a keystyle...keep elevating duke...one

[Jai-Cee]

uppin for feed

[Glory]

this was a nice quick key to exaggerate being sick in a sort of headache state. like most said, it was catchy, with a nice fast beat to it. the word use was great, and the flow was nice, ya had a couple multies.

Wish I was dead; this mortal life seems hard with frailty…
It aint even terminal infirmity but even aspirin can’t ail me…

those are my favorite lines in it. sounds almost quotable. good job on this piece. nice stuff.

peace

[Jai-Cee]

w00t uppin...

[Jai-Cee]

Uppin for some decent feed...

[Jiggsaw16]

truly sick

[xVerbal KInTx]

good stuff

[Jai-Cee]

decent feed...?

truly sick

and

good stuff

this is the definition of bad feed... It is more or less freeposting...