I put this in cypher, freestyle and thought it would be a good topic to put in open mic to hopefully get me some feedback. I know its a simplistic verse but i just like the concept of it. let me know what u think. thanks!
i dont brag about ice, i got none
like u rap about gats, u actually got guns?
ya i grew up rich, but u dont see me snitch
and u grew up in the gutter?, all i see is a bitch
ive had girlfriends, and thats what i reccomend
you been with hos?, but it will all come to an end
im still in school, now im clever
you though it was cool to drop out, your stupid forever
i stick with my peeps, i'm always there when needed
u tell em your down for life, when they hurt their cries are unheeded
i dont got a car, when i get one its gonna be a heep
u rap about caddies to me it's bizarre, when i seen u last week walkin down my street
no im not big and buff, but i aint affraid of shit
your always acting tough, but when u get confronted your always backin up
this is a freestyle that shows im legit, funny how people pretend so they can fit
60 percent of em fake in they spits, 15 percent are commited to this
the other 25 percent dont know what there doing cause they new to this shit
its Unreal, how many people misrepresent?
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Originally Posted by UnrealDeal
