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[If I vote on your battle return the favor!!!
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You’ve challenged me to a battle, it better be good,
I ain’t got no time to mess around with little bitches acting like they live in da hood.
Lets make this quick, I wanna wrap this up before dinner,
no need to vote with rhymes like this I’m already the winner.
I’m sick of leading you on, your now acting like you da bomb,
move on over here comes the don, I’m bigger then motherfuckin King Kong.
You talk like youve got an asshole in your throat, you talke alot of shit and aint none of it legit.
This was just a tiny feud, now its turned into a battle, somebody give this bitch a rattle,
or even a dummy cause this little faggot still believes in the easter bunny.
sorry to spoil it for you, he aint real, your parents dont love you, your adopted and thats the real deal.
You’ll be dazzled by my spinning chromes, mess with me ill beat you down like I’m Roy Jones.
So come on holmes, you up in the big league now, you rhyme like your little bow wow,
you gotta be over 5ft high to ride this ride, you probably weren’t even born when Pac died,
I give you props atleast you tried, better luck next time,
if you wanna beat me youre gonna need more then one good line.
Ur Rhymes Are To Simple
Grab A Pad Of Paper And Practice By Pencil
Smash Ya Head Off A Cactus
While Stabin U With Dinner Utensils
How Does That Feel Fool,
U Think Ur The Don Well Really Ya Unskillful
Writin Shit I Never Said Will Get U Killed Too
Rhymes Written Like They Were Bittin From Preschool Hymns
Get Some Real Shit Kid,
Dont Think Im Just Messin When I Say Ur A Bitch
You Think Ur Real Good But Ya Still Get Dissed
Ur Rhymes Meen Noting Like They Dont Even Exist
And I Bet Ya Faggot Ass Gets Off When U Pumpin Fists
Tried To Throw A Punch But Ur Hit Just Missed
Where U Get That I Live In Da Hood? I Live In A City!
I Get Right To The Nitty-griddy
Like Me Whoopin Ur Ass I Make U Look Itty-bitty
Bite The Curb Bitch This Won't Be Pretty
Now Ima Finish This
School Is Over Now Bitches Dismissed
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Ok. We have both posted our verses now it's time for the votes. If your looking and you can vote then do it so we can get this over with. If you have anything you would like feedback on I will leave it as long as you vote for one of us and leave your link. thanks for voting have a nice day!
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that battle was straight i dont have enough post yet to vote tho but wen i do ill be hittin this up but for now
v/ macdizzle
I like it UnrealDeal, nice work. now its down to the people.
uppin for votes. come on lets get em in. please dont just look if u can vote. i wanna get this damn thing over with
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Unreal deal did this because he just had great flow.
ah can't edit
Umm
I liked UD,because it had great flow and shit,i hope he can win this battle, hes reel good.
Repay me
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=155917
Unreal Deal Had A Better Flow And Had Better Battle Lines
Vote-unrealdeal
uppin for votes....................................
uppin for votes 2................come on people, if you read this then please vote so this battle can be over.
uppin 3, this battle has been going on for a week now, please vote!
I think that Macdizzile got this battle because i feel that Macdizzile came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Macdizzile got it they were used effectifely and were on point UnrealDeal u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Macdizzile good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Macdizzile and flow and structure i'll give to UnrealDeal yours was very basic but Macdizziles' was stretched as hell...work on that.
V/Macdizzile There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly
R.I.P OMB
Mac:
You’ve challenged me to a battle, it better be good,
I ain’t got no time to mess around with little bitches acting like they live in da hood.
Lets make this quick, I wanna wrap this up before dinner,
no need to vote with rhymes like this I’m already the winner.
I’m sick of leading you on, your now acting like you da bomb,
move on over here comes the don, I’m bigger then motherfuckin King Kong.
You talk like youve got an asshole in your throat, you talke alot of shit and aint none of it legit.
This was just a tiny feud, now its turned into a battle, somebody give this bitch a rattle,
or even a dummy cause this little faggot still believes in the easter bunny.
sorry to spoil it for you, he aint real, your parents dont love you, your adopted and thats the real deal.
You’ll be dazzled by my spinning chromes, mess with me ill beat you down like I’m Roy Jones.
So come on holmes, you up in the big league now, you rhyme like your little bow wow,
you gotta be over 5ft high to ride this ride, you probably weren’t even born when Pac died,
I give you props atleast you tried, better luck next time,
if you wanna beat me youre gonna need more then one good line.
Good closer. The verse was okay itself, and packed only a few punches though. u glorfied urself in the battle when the object is ta make fun of the other guy. Other than that the verse was okay, but nothin really stellar and no knockout punches.
Unreal:
Ur Rhymes Are To Simple
Grab A Pad Of Paper And Practice By Pencil
Smash Ya Head Off A Cactus
While Stabin U With Dinner Utensils
How Does That Feel Fool,
U Think Ur The Don Well Really Ya Unskillful
Writin Shit I Never Said Will Get U Killed Too
Rhymes Written Like They Were Bittin From Preschool Hymns
Get Some Real Shit Kid,
Dont Think Im Just Messin When I Say Ur A Bitch
You Think Ur Real Good But Ya Still Get Dissed
Ur Rhymes Meen Noting Like They Dont Even Exist
And I Bet Ya Faggot Ass Gets Off When U Pumpin Fists
Tried To Throw A Punch But Ur Hit Just Missed
Where U Get That I Live In Da Hood? I Live In A City!
I Get Right To The Nitty-griddy
Like Me Whoopin Ur Ass I Make U Look Itty-bitty
Bite The Curb Bitch This Won't Be Pretty
Now Ima Finish This
School Is Over Now Bitches Dismissed
Okay opener. Bad closer. There were a few places in ur flow that were creative such as,"rymes bitten from preschool hymns", not taht creative but more creative than the other guy. Not bad punches, no knockout but u had maybe one heavy hitter.
U both could use elevation....but my vote goes too:Unreal, for the better verse and the harder punch.
Hit up the battles in my sig, and return the fava./
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