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tha's it only 5 bars?
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eyo u there??
no d/r
no biting
no crew vote
no hate vote
alrite 5 bars. due by tonite.
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watever im droppin my shit
i-amaze-me is re-tarted, he kept selling his body to michael jackson// (tarted = prostitute)
he's beating his meat and singin "beat it", he thinks he's president like Andrew jackson// (beating his meat = jackin off)
he's not shy to show off his ugly shit//
same as when janet show off her saggy titts//
i saw his face and i thought it was halloween//
he be scaring the monsters off instead of them//
he waved to the girl tha was passsin by//
he read her lips thought she said hello guy//
but she's was acttually saying HELL NO DIE//
after he read this he'll b patrify//
while the girl be happy cuz im killing him lovly.
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taes? back wards take a SEAT sit back an watch my raps tear*
U couldn’t get a standing ovation if the crowd lacked chairs!
This battle is over-for-ya.. battles no longer a fair sport
U left unable to carry on, like Al Qaeda luggage at airports
A rare sort of wack MC should know I’m ill AND the shit
Spill ‘2%’ of my skill on ya verse an ‘skim’ through ya script
Watch Iamaze lay this faggot to rest, don’t battle the best
Your whole life is in jeopardy.. like u was Alex Trebeck!
Who said this net battlin shit was never a true sport?
helping clean up ground zero only time u get respect in new york!**
*nameplay
**his location is new york
uppin for votes..
i will return the favor and vote on your battle!!
uppin #3................................................ .......
Tae- Retire now.....verse was weak!!!! You need extreme elevation.....punches were ehh yeah not good. Structure was off lines going everywhere......Flow was Ugly Don't rhyme same words....Thats a no no. But keep elevatin and spittin you'll get better
Amaze- Verse was way better Structure was koo I just don't like the gaps between your lines...easy fix. Punches were hittin...nice wordplay. Flow was strong...on point. You take this one easily......just take out them gaps....
V/ Amaze
uppin #3..........................................
i-amaze-me is re-tarted, he kept selling his body to michael jackson// (tarted = prostitute)
he's beating his meat and singin "beat it", he thinks he's president like Andrew jackson// (beating his meat = jackin off)
played and weak...u rhymed 'jackson' twice
he's not shy to show off his ugly shit//
same as when janet show off her saggy titts//
no...
i saw his face and i thought it was halloween//
he be scaring the monsters off instead of them//
no...and it doesnt rhyme...
he waved to the girl tha was passsin by//
he read her lips thought she said hello guy//
but she's was acttually saying HELL NO DIE//
after he read this he'll b patrify//
wtf...this is childishly basic...and i think u meant to say 'petrified'...blah
while the girl be happy cuz im killing him lovly.
horrible closer, and dont ever use an odd number of lines, it looks sloppy
taes? back wards take a SEAT sit back an watch my raps tear*
U couldn’t get a standing ovation if the crowd lacked chairs!
this was okay...
This battle is over-for-ya.. battles no longer a fair sport
U left unable to carry on, like Al Qaeda luggage at airports
lol, okay...
A rare sort of wack MC should know I’m ill AND the shit
Spill ‘2%’ of my skill on ya verse an ‘skim’ through ya script
nah...dont self-glorify...
Watch Iamaze lay this faggot to rest, don’t battle the best
Your whole life is in jeopardy.. like u was Alex Trebeck!
ehhh...played...
Who said this net battlin shit was never a true sport?
helping clean up ground zero only time u get respect in new york!**
okay...
This was a one-sider...Taesoo, u need to git rid of the /// that shit's uneccessary...and work on your structure too...but punches and wordplay is where u need the most improvement...your disses were just childish/basic....wtf was wit that part about readin a girl's lips???????? WTF?!....Amaze, ya verse was straight...u had the nameplay personals that were aight and your punches were good...nothin that was really outstandin, but then again, u didnt need much here...
V/ Amaze...easily
i need an honest vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=153822
Taesoo your verse wasnt verry good. It didn't ryme at all, it had no punches, and pretty much sucked. You need to get rid of the whole /// at the end of your lines (You did that in all of your battles when people told you to get rid of it.)
Iamazeme your verse was pretty funny. Had some nice flow to it. I like the Al quida Line it was fuckin hillarious. Keep it up. You merked the kid.
Vote to Iamazeme for overall better verse.
v/amaze
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man atleast ur was set out properly, good structure, weak but far better punches, wordplay was meh, metas mas again meh... ur vocab, wasnt used much but was ok and only a rhymes were ok..
taeso was wack like fuk man.. ur shit was so dull and stupid to read, no complexity, no punches, no word play, metas weak, structure hell as basic... this was an extremely weak verse wit no good points about it.. and stop explaining ur vote in ur rap... explain after... and ur rap should be self explained.. cause imagine u freestylin and after ur rap u like, this meant this and that.. boy ull get shot.. so both need heaps of practice but amaze got this easily due to obvious reasons..
return the favor and vote here cause i need votes there.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=155874
uppin #4...............................................
-bad opener bro, on top of a whack line, you rhymed michael jackson and andrew jackson lolOriginally Posted by taesoo
-"he's not shy to show off his ugly shit//
same as when janet show off her saggy titts" you really into them jacksons...
-filler, filler, filler
-closer is weak as hell, just like your whole verse. you need substance, or at least wordplay and shit that rhymes
-hot opener, flippin his name AND a nice a punchline
-"This battle is over-for-ya.. battles no longer a fair sport
U left unable to carry on, like Al Qaeda luggage at airports" thats an ok punchline, i didn t care for it too much tho
-"Watch Iamaze lay this faggot to rest, don’t battle the best
Your whole life is in jeopardy.. like u was Alex Trebeck! " again, another hot line, good punch and good flow
-"Who said this net battlin shit was never a true sport?
helping clean up ground zero only time u get respect in new york" lol, shit man...you got him again.
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was not an even battle, IAmazeMe killed him. taesoo lacked rhymes, substance, etc. and IAmazeMe was all punches, most of were personal which is a plus. VOTE = IAmazeMe
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