Forever on My Lips

[Ace of Aces]

thanks man, she loved it.

[Marek]

this was interesting for some reason. it seemed as if the category this was put into was described as if,
it were in a different analog. you know what im sayin?
for instance, the perspective in this peice was about a girl, ok well,
it was like the whole concept was a real big twist, you know? sorda like fitting in with something else.
you know what im sayin?
anyways,
i thought this was very creative mixed with a little bit of originality. and that equals up to be,
a decent peice.
overall, nice read and very nice work Ace.
keep writing and doing what you do.
be strong and stay stong.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154671

Return.....Thanx.

[Ace of Aces]

thanks man, it makes sense, but then it doesnt. lol.

[Chris Black]

This was ill. One of my favorie pieces from you. The scheme was nice and your wording is always good. I enjoyed the read. Keep up the good work.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154709

[Ace of Aces]

graci'ius.