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    youth freestyle

    youth freesyle (yo im english so if u no wot i mean i kinda do english mc more if your english u will undastand this a lot more)

    yes yes no time to beat around da bush//
    i need to chat sum beats so please just close ya mush//

    yo yo there was many ppl in my life at skool//
    there was many people takin me for a fool//
    in sceince finkin they were bad cos they got the big stool//
    i used to hate these prick finkin we all rule//
    sum boy chattin shit outside n offlicense chattin so do u fink your cool//
    i smaked im to dafloor and sed no but u do//
    u aint big for one u aint got no pubes//
    u aint rude u jus sum prick hus crude//
    there da type of pricks that made me possesed//
    made me fuck around gettin al stressed//
    pushin over people jus a public mess//
    i did lose my temper that i will confess//
    but if u were like me youd be fucked to in da head//
    every mornin time for skool dont wanna get out of bed//
    if i say da rong i would see da blood shed//
    if i say da rong fing i would end up dead//
    then the pigs hustlin me how i hate the fedz//
    luckily i got to know a few harsh mans//
    lukily soon enough i was in my mate's van//
    then i got respect then i got feared//
    when we were around round every corner they would pear//
    to see if we was there or morealess near//
    we roamed green n sand//
    like it was are land//
    it felt great we was on top of the it was grand//
    then round da corner came sum mans chattin shit//
    then came a blow a fat lip//
    then came the boys fukt up hip//
    then came the boy wit a broken jaw//
    we fukt em up it was raw//
    then came the g.b.h court order//
    then came ma mates sentancin to four//
    years in prison he spent trying to escape//
    fuckin huge pricks tryin to comit rape//
    life goes on you got a leave it alone//
    now sum dick wanna chat down da phone//
    but when they cum for a fite they look like they just been boned//
    petrafied//
    horrafied//
    they almost creid//
    so we just left emn stepped to the side//
    we was leavin prints on faces//
    girls in fazes//
    girls in dazes//
    doulble lock the door//
    bra n panties on the floor//
    leave her feelin sore//
    n no id never shag a whore//
    dats like cleanin out da pipes while ur doin your house chores//
    yes yes dats my youtimism flow//
    bustin straight out of a feller who jus cant say no//
    when he gets offered a lice show.

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    U GOTTA FIX the grammar, otherwise it would be pretty good

    Peace

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    yo defiantly fix up the grammar and it will be pretty hot, i like what you hit on...just keep doing you, 1
    HARLEM STAND UP!!!!!!!!

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    The structure was bad but you could do alot better if you just get a topic and tell a tale.

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