5 bars/10 lines..
Due in 30 minutes..
Chewy
Talksick
5 bars/10 lines..
Due in 30 minutes..
Check$
I wannit fair, and the deadline is up.. I have my 10 lines ready so once I see your verse I'll drop mine like 2 seconds after..
*hurry up*
Yo sorry but im bout to go to T.O for a party, ill be back sometime tonite and drop my verse, my bad, i aint think i was leavin this soon, dont cancell the battle, ill be back, im still tryna do this, but its my birthday and my peoples is getin me in this strip club up there. ill be back, this is my check in
Artificial Intelligence
Hurry tha fuck up, it's the next morning!!!!!!!!!!
This guy cant rap, I know this and haven’t seen him spit
Homie your lines were never ‘ill,’ u jus merely ‘Talk sick’
U winnin this battle, please homie u gotta be kiddin
Cause I ‘son’ Canadians, like im an explorer from Britain
Who ever told u were nice left u really deceived
got u takin losses in Toronto, like the maple leaves
Naw im playin I like T.O, so my lines come off feeble
O… I thought we were talking bout T.O from the eagles sighs
Player stop rappin, try makin beats, cause ur rhymes is quite wack
But havin a ‘aughter wit weave’s’as close ull come to producing a nice ‘rack’
Artificial Intelligence
SHIT, 'pRODUCIN A NICE TRACK' is waht that should say,
this shit was wack, i need to stop drinkin, good luck player, sry for keepin u waitin
Artificial Intelligence
Only time you 'cum hard' is when you got your 'dick in men'--
Taking a verse 'camping' is the only time your shits 'in-tents'--
You couldn't 'score a win' if you fucking 'played wit my best'--
Cuz like 'Starbursts', they're 'Chewy' but still 'made to digest'--*
Only time ya 'passed danger' is when ya 'crossed a stop sign'--
If tha 'phone fell out your hand' you couldn't 'drop a hot-line'--
About time I tore-this-bitch, your bio is wrong, it's more a flip--
Cuz on my fucking 'front lawn' is the only time your 'the shit'--**
Who's next? damn, ya couldn't 'ace' this with the 'best hand'--
This battle is jus like your 'avy', I'm sendin you an 'X man'--***
*Nameplay..
**It says "I'm the shit" in his bio..
***Avatar diss..
talk stick dq'd for having more then 3 active battles
mike, he had 2 battles in FL and 2 in EFL. this isnt against the rules.
Uppin #1........................................^^
Chewy..
This guy cant rap, I know this and haven’t seen him spit
Homie your lines were never ‘ill,’ u jus merely ‘Talk sick’
Ok, nice.
U winnin this battle, please homie u gotta be kiddin
Cause I ‘son’ Canadians, like im an explorer from Britain
Decent..
Who ever told u were nice left u really deceived
got u takin losses in Toronto, like the maple leaves
Ok concept, not all that hard.
Naw im playin I like T.O, so my lines come off feeble
O… I thought we were talking bout T.O from the eagles sighs
Nah.. way forced.
Player stop rappin, try makin beats, cause ur rhymes is quite wack
But havin a ‘aughter wit weave’s’as close ull come to producing a nice ‘rack’
Ugh, ugly closer bro.
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Talksick.
Only time you 'cum hard' is when you got your 'dick in men'--
Taking a verse 'camping' is the only time your shits 'in-tents'--
Blah, cum lines are gay.
You couldn't 'score a win' if you fucking 'played wit my best'--
Cuz like 'Starbursts', they're 'Chewy' but still 'made to digest'--*
Lol, nice.
Only time ya 'passed danger' is when ya 'crossed a stop sign'--
If tha 'phone fell out your hand' you couldn't 'drop a hot-line'--
Boooo, hot-line punches are beaten to death.
About time I tore-this-bitch, your bio is wrong, it's more a flip--
Cuz on my fucking 'front lawn' is the only time your 'the shit'--**
Got a chuckle..decent.
Who's next? damn, ya couldn't 'ace' this with the 'best hand'--
This battle is jus like your 'avy', I'm sendin you an 'X man'--***
Ok.
Overall, pretty one-sided.. Chewy had one nice line, his opener, and that was about it. Talksick was much more direct and backed up his punches and personals with alot more wit and creativity. Not a bad battle, but this had an obvious winner. Nice job guys.
Vote/Talksick
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talks=itz your best ive seen....alright wit your punches....vocab was decent...liked ya content...improve wit ya word play some tight ideas thou...
structure was tight....cant find too much bad about it...but itz still the average......
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You couldn't 'score a win' if you fucking 'played wit my best'--
Cuz like 'Starbursts', they're 'Chewy' but still 'made to digest'--*
chewy=need some work on ya punches... got some good ideas.....just need to be re-worded alittle....content blah.....yo vocab wasnt that nice....structure alittle scuffled....you did alright thou...did sound like you was drunk thou...lol..
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This guy cant rap, I know this and haven’t seen him spit
Homie your lines were never ‘ill,’ u jus merely ‘Talk sick’
vote=talksick
hit up my battlez against Xclusive.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=149607
Uppin #2........................................^^
talk sick takes this easily,i cant vote but i think he deserves the win for wordplay and good punches,yo talksick vote on my battle in my sig,no one eva votes on newb battles cuz newbs cant vote back,so do me the fava of voten in this one for the help ok thx -1-
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Uppin #3........................................^^