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[noncentz]

now im trapped in this morbid orbit of destiney in a human orfice-
my life is hard... ill take the easy out..... and forefit.
what the point of fighting for a mean~ing-
when half the word defines to be demeaning.
so if u feel retaliation is justice does that make it a just cause?
do u fight for the proper clause or just because-
is this for ur people or just for their applause?
are u really progressing or putting evolution on pause?
first we killed man for land now we war for it resources-
so is it for something or nothing?
or an explanation for why they we relentless and remoarseless?
do we live life or just have the 6th sence and live as walking coarpses?
and we always want to blame everything and point the fault in dif directions-
till eventually ur mirror image places the accusation on ur own reflection.
if i told the world the turth and gave them atleast 80 percent proof-
would they except it or think i handed them a bottle of ABSOLUTE?
drink away the pain-thats concious misaimed-
waisting digesting ur savior to chase away the blame.
when its mans nature to war then what are woman for?
as something to do when we board or to be forced to be whores?
they keep the peace but instead we use them for a peace its complex-
cause then we wonder why women talk nonsence
and become hoes when they learn to love sex.
u see for every cause there's a reason-for every moron there is a legion-
of colleagents dumb assess ready to pledge alleagence.
solute ur ignorance-racist say this is the land of arian puritans-
minorties are figureliss and the country be better niggerless.
but undderstand most the american population-
isnt even american instead from foreign nations.
the crossed the sea see so what that explanation?
when ur mothers and fathers are one race -
and came to the states to escape the persicution and hate?
and there's no need to exagerate-look at the crime rate-
soon we'll seperate like cali's tectonic plates.
why are there drugs in the hood? why does it feel so good?
to act righteous then ask for light to ignite this?
why is money the object why do i live in the projects-
where's god where's the reason and where's the reasons logic?
the question is why but why ask why-
by the time u find the answer u would live life long enough to die.

[noncentz]

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[Marek]

just got done reading this....it was a cool peice man.
flow was kinda fishy on it...and structure wasn't that great, but other than that dude, you had,
everything their.
i enjoy reading peices who have very good usage of vocabulary,
and you had that in this peice,
so therefore i really enjoyed reading this man.
keep writing and dont stop.

-Marek

[SMZ]

if you have a Soundclick I wan'na hear it - this was dope - me goes to nominate for special stuff

[noncentz]

yeah i structure only how i spit in all my time here i never learned to structuire so other would catch the beat from it so i get alot of bad comment but the lines and their meaning s what counts.

[noncentz]

uppin

[Johnny C.]

lots of good vocab in there... i dont even know what half of it means lol jk. seriously, dude, this was pretty good and it really made me think. yea, it was kinda long, but that's what open mic's for! keep it up.

[Whitelightning]

well shit...I can't believe your still around...

Good to see your still filling open mic. Good shit as usual. You are def wanna the best OM heads to every walk across this board. Constant solid vocab and struc make this good shit.

Look forward to continue to see your shit...Check out my return piece..."Two Faces"

[Lazarus X]

the lyrical content and shit was real solid. some of it really held my attention. i wanna hear the audio because it was hard to catch the beat just by reading it. the only thing wrong was that some of that shit just dont make sense though like:

if i told the world the turth and gave them atleast 80 percent proof-
would they except it or think i handed them a bottle of ABSOLUTE?
drink away the pain-thats concious misaimed-
waisting digesting ur savior to chase away the blame.

that shit right there was kinda burnt out. the rhyme scheme was solid but the meaning is unclear. other than that this shit was HOT

[noncentz]

the lyrical content and shit was real solid. some of it really held my attention. i wanna hear the audio because it was hard to catch the beat just by reading it. the only thing wrong was that some of that shit just dont make sense though like:

if i told the world the turth and gave them atleast 80 percent proof-
would they except it or think i handed them a bottle of ABSOLUTE?
drink away the pain-thats concious misaimed-
waisting digesting ur savior to chase away the blame.

that shit right there was kinda burnt out. the rhyme scheme was solid but the meaning is unclear. other than that this shit was HOT

okay i knew this would be recieved odd cause i boke poetic stanza and through 2 metaphors in one where they would be lost.... basolute is 80 proof-so what i mean is if i gave y thetruth would u loose its meaning and create ur own?
"also when i say drink ur pain thats concious misaimed" that means finding a solution in a bottle instead of ur faith... so when u drink ur savior i mean ur truning ur back on faith just so u can justify mistajkes with excuses.

[noncentz]

Uppin

[MCG123]

Dude this shit is pretty dope. i enjoyed it very much. Igotta give it to you man you touch on some real important issues. Its nice to hear some verses with socially consous issues. Keep on

[noncentz]

uppin

[Dios de Hip Hop]

what are u doing still posting with that
noob ass flow/structure. what a hoe.
but nice peice
the question is why but why ask why-
by the time u find the answer u would live life long enough to die.e
^ good line
deep stuff i thought it was was good.

-dao/mantik

[Willy B]

uuuupppppppppppin this