Lean Back Verses...Soon To be Audio

[G-Money]

The Return posted his verse earlier this week
these are my verses in it, should be an audio
by tuesday...look for it....feedback plz....

Verse 1

we gotta bitch ass crew?? until the day y'all prove
it'll be the day we leave
its the return of g-money n lg
aint none of y'all want no problems wit me
im the king of shadowbrook wont stop until u bleed
wont stop until all y'all bowin to me
wont stop until im gettin respect
fuck a *MC Merc* n fuck that nigga *Suspect*
u aint nuthin lil nigga watch me break-u-down
u think u hard like *J-Kown* watch me *Hood Hop* ur ass
until ur face in the ground, n i aint playin around
u wanna step to a real nigga like me
u gonna beat my ass if u see me in the streets???!!! ha not likely
swoop to a lower level is really not like me
but for ya ass imma make an acception, show u how meaningless u are like
a Cam'ron collection

The Return Has Verse 2

Verse 3

like LG said i got hollow tips that'll make ur ass lean back
i show u, u aint nuthin but a pain in the ass like the hairs on my nutt sack
like *Ludacris* make u *Get The Fuck Back*, whats that?
u wanna open ur mouth some more?? u wont say shit once u layin on the floor
on the asphalt, im pullin them triggas until fall, leavin em in aww
beat ur ass then call ur mom n her friend to have me a menage trios
u best believe that im gettin the moms, take her to las vegas n have a sweet in the palms,
she jack me off til i bust in her palms
or better yet right in her mouth, u better shut ur mouth
u lil ass kid u dont know wat u sayin
turn u into a paraody like im keenan ivory wayans...Muthafucka!!



***Verse 3 is directly intended for Suspect***

[eric brandt]

yo, thanks for readin' my shit.
i like your flow in most places. I don't really get on boards in general and i'm real, real new to this one (like i was bored and found a place i could put somethin' i wrote when i was drunk last night new), so i didn't really know who you were talking about in your disses, but they weren't too bad. i am all about dudes finishin' battle raps strong, and you kinda fell off at the end but this wasn't a bad effort.

[G-Money]

thanks for the feedback .... keep it comin

[Mistral]

You need 2 leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, thanks.

[G-Money]

shit my bad.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=141300
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=141942

[***DEST***]

nice flow.. topic was played tho... i mean .its the typical ..im hard, bow down to me , ill fuck you up sorta style.. but if thats what you were going for you got the message across nicely.

like i said i felt you flow nicely.. you rhymes were off on only a couple a parts .. but the rest was iight man keep dropping

pz

[G-Money]

lol....im jus gettin my point across to a certain person ... im not tryin to say im a gangsta or n e thing thats jus how i talk shit...i will fight im not scurred... im not trippin though i respect ur feedback it was positive not negative like the rest thanks

[t-west]

It was alright. I had to hear it in audience to give it a proper reply though. The written format just doesn't do it. No real standout lines, but decent job. I didn't like your wordplay either, kinda simplistic, things like the cam'rom line didn't stand out to me, but you'll get better. Decent work overall. Look forward to the audio. Leave feedback on my work when I post it.

[G-Money]

thanks for the feedback keep it coming .....