Heaven Against Hell (Featuring RRX)

[Talksick]

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RRX
Talksick

You're telling me we'd work better together? Thats one i'd like to see..
Because the only thing attracting me to that offer, is the Devil in me..

I'm a rebel you see, I send ya mail so there's Hell in every letter you read..
All humanity is mine muhfucka, get ready for a better New Breed..

Some never lived, and were forced to do the opposite, follow the deviL..
There's bad and then theres evil, but you're taking this to another level..

You don't stand no chance in this fight with evil, despite this ego..
I'll set fire to ya pigeons and leave em lookin like lifeless seagulls..

You've bent my lines, trying to keep it straight, dealin with evil at all times..
And the reason my son died, was because you were in the peoples minds..

Hang wit the me, sip this horrific potion as I swing my staff in specific motion..
You couldn't out the depths of Hell if you unplugged the Pacific Ocean..

Fuck you, I've got names of problems, and you the top of my listing..
You wouldn't even be here if I hadn't created the place you exist in..

Listen, this battle's like the starting line, so lets settle it, GO n finish..
Not afraid to commit murder cuz the Devel ain't goin to prison..

I got people behind me, and you got nothin, forgettin who's runnin the game..
How the fuck am I s'posed to worry, when even Hitler was afraid to rep your name?

Cuz your not on my level you see, so I suggest you just settle n breathe..
But don't get too close, I just might havta unleash the Devil in me..

I'll choke you with my fuckin halo, if that's what it takes to get rid of you..
Incase you hadn't noticed, I'm gettin fed up of you shit and I'm gettin sick of you..

Didn't you read the bible? Cuz in the real story your dead, your in over your head..
So fly back up, and don't be suprised if there's separated limbs all over your bed..

[TheGhettosShakes]

ok i dont like this at all its been done x runs it others tried all failed its very unoriginal and that killed it for me.you dropped good but the topic is just corny.i dont mean to give bad critizism but its the truth your aight but you need to put some thoughts into topics or a label wont let you put it on a album

[Talksick]

wtf

[Yung Face]

i was feelin dis shyt, good concept and vocab. keep it up

[Talksick]

IIght, up^^

[Talksick]

^^^^

[Nephil]

Topic's alright - but I think you could've done better with implementing it - set the contrast up more... - get deeper into the argument... - flow was alright - rhymes coulda been a little more complex - decent work overall - just keep at it - expand a little more next time - peace

hit this:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=140469

[Talksick]

^^^^

[t-west]

SMZ was right...you two really should of gotten deeper into the argument. It would of made the piece much better. Hmmm...I saw some multies in there...that atleast counts for something. But actual content...It was decent. Keep practicing and you'll get better.


pz. god bless.
- T-West.

[Talksick]

IIght..^^