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Last edited by Cameosis; August 4th, 2004 at 06:17 PM
You'll burn and roast, killed you once but you march on like German ghosts
Still got the nerve to boast, when u use the same lame multies in every verse you post
This joke is begging it, I'll rip you twice so youve no hope to question it
Ill KO you so you can whine?! Like a virgin's cunt you're so over sensitive
Confess it your shit, allow professing your sick, it's best if you quit
The lesson is this: You got less claim to skill than Shrek does to fit
Youve fallen into a swift descent, your verses stink worse than your filthy-scent
Allow your cynical distortions, punches till I collapse from physical exhaustion
You Know I will do a good Job unleashing wrath of biblical proportions
If u stopped battling peeped snore less sad because I'm felt more than a whores chest
From newb to vet you never made transition, bullshit that flows plain tradition
This boys got no prospects, so I guess flipping burger's your lifes main ambition
Wow I shoulda just got a bye my first week, lol
This guys a soldier... Merked the 1st week and back without a hiccup
Well I guess duty calls.... too bad ya skills didn't 'pick up'
I read ya last battle. Ya got the first by the time the battle was closing
...First person to get merked by ShadowEdge... when he was voting
Haven't learned to mention ya opponent after 1000 posts plus more
Cuz you suck, everyones 'sleeps on you' cuz u a fucking post 'whore'
I asked Foreshadow for my future. He said "Hold on it's gettin clearer"
"Doesn't look bright" he stated...
...but i saw his crystal ball was a mirror
In text I'll rip ya with "more marks than quotations" and just as "opened up"
Stab you with points of exclamation until you reach a full stop
Like I tried to chase away dudes with scoliosis; I "ran off hunches" fool
But I expected prewrites with no personals...
...not without punches too
Isn't quite what I expected the first week but w/e
Uppin 4 Votes..
I asked Foreshadow for my future. He said "Hold on it's gettin clearer"
"Doesn't look bright" he stated...
...but i saw his crystal ball was a mirror
In text I'll rip ya with "more marks than quotations" and just as "opened up"
Stab you with points of exclamation until you reach a full stop
Like I tried to chase away dudes with scoliosis; I "ran off hunches" fool
But I expected prewrites with no personals...
...not without punches too
^haha at the last line. Pretty nice. I didnt think there was any punches in foreshadows verse, it was alot of blah blah with good flow but not saying much.
u had too many lines like..
Allow your cynical distortions, punches till I collapse from physical exhaustion
You Know I will do a good Job unleashing wrath of biblical proportions
^not a punch dood.
anyways...v cameron
Depthz.
ehh forshadow had a run on verse and barely and punches
as stated above... you talked about your self a lot too..
just not feelin you verse...blahhh
cam wins with better punches better personals
the whole 9 ...
V/ Cameron.
pz
Foreshadow: Your verse had pretty nice vocab but most of the shit in it was really stretched or didn't punch at all. You had lots of self-glorification which is useless in a battle unless it leads into a punch. Basically no punches at all within your verse, meaning it sucked. Insult him next time.
Cameron: You actually surprised me here. Nothing was really fantastic, but you had some personals and a few niceish punches. I liked the Shadows Edge punch, the mirror one could have been dope with better wording, as well as your closer which was the best in the battle.
/v Cameron.
Foreshadow:
Your two line opener was pretty nice...
But you lacked hard hitting punches on
the real....Nice structure and flow nice
vocabulary...but no hard hitting punches.
cameronj86:
"In text I'll rip ya with "more marks than quotations" and just as "opened up"
Stab you with points of exclamation until you reach a full stop"
^ Pretty good.
You had flow ok structure..
Nothing that hard hitting however
you did have more then one quotables
to win this battle...
v/Cam
due to consistent better punches then ForeShadow
You'll burn and roast, killed you once but you march on like German ghosts
Still got the nerve to boast, when u use the same lame multies in every verse you post
okay
This joke is begging it, I'll rip you twice so youve no hope to question it
Ill KO you so you can whine?! Like a virgin's cunt you're so over sensitive
NOPE
Confess it your shit, allow professing your sick, it's best if you quit
The lesson is this: You got less claim to skill than Shrek does to fit
Shrek?Really?
Youve fallen into a swift descent, your verses stink worse than your filthy-scent
Allow your cynical distortions, punches till I collapse from physical exhaustion
You Know I will do a good Job unleashing wrath of biblical proportions
If u stopped battling peeped snore less sad because I'm felt more than a whores chest
WTF is this? What did you use ABBA rhyme scheme?Except for the fact exhaustion and proportions do not ryhme.You're felt more than a whore's chest?*shakes head*
From newb to vet you never made transition, bullshit that flows plain tradition
This boys got no prospects, so I guess flipping burger's your lifes main ambition
I bet that hurt...flippin burgers?
Wow I shoulda just got a bye my first week, lol
you like swaying?
This guys a soldier... Merked the 1st week and back without a hiccup
Well I guess duty calls.... too bad ya skills didn't 'pick up'
got a laugh
I read ya last battle. Ya got the first by the time the battle was closing
...First person to get merked by ShadowEdge... when he was voting
NOPE
Haven't learned to mention ya opponent after 1000 posts plus more
Cuz you suck, everyones 'sleeps on you' cuz u a fucking post 'whore'
NOPE
I asked Foreshadow for my future. He said "Hold on it's gettin clearer"
"Doesn't look bright" he stated...
...but i saw his crystal ball was a mirror
okay idea...bad wording 86
In text I'll rip ya with "more marks than quotations" and just as "opened up"
Stab you with points of exclamation until you reach a full stop
meh
Like I tried to chase away dudes with scoliosis; I "ran off hunches" fool
But I expected prewrites with no personals...
...not without punches too
scoliosis?Really?
Isn't quite what I expected the first week but w/e
Can you prove this was worth even posting?
I did NOT like this at all.
Vote 86
Wewillfuckyouup.......er.
-me & my man Sav get the bitches quick
inconsiderate conglomerate, I got the sickest click
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damn shadow tho you would be betta anyway cam got it
Strucuture:This Catergory is a tie cuz you both had good structure, multies are always good,
personals:Cam took this the personal about the 1,000 plus posts really stuck with me, and shadow's lame multies personal wasn't that good matter of fact it was garbage
punches:Cam took this, none y'all punches were like "oh damn that's funny as hell" the crystal ball punched sucked could have been worded betta to me,and shadow ya shit was just not there, but cam's opener was betta than ya whole verse to me
V/Cam
I believe i'm making some good music, please just wait for me
[sc]https://soundcloud.com/hood-society/what-you-fear-featuring-a-cas[/sc]
foreshadow you from another site? I always chuckle when I see a multi-obsessed kid with half ass punches, like multi's will win the battle or somethin.
multi's are not even hard, I'll start leavin scars....
you must be in gymnastics with them uneven bars
see what I mean? unimpressive....
v - Cameron for being less wack.
not like it matters..
but multies are lame excuses to get out of punches..
*Goes on to give long ass lecture*
blah fuck it.
Cam had the only good punch in here..
V/cam
Always Impervious an Axis Power.
Supermod Me.
Cameron took this easy with a verse that had more witty punches and metas.....Foreshadow's verse wasn't that creative and the punches didn't hit that hard
Vote-Cameron
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