ZoNe Tha P.S. Vs. Intense_it_E

[ZoNe Tha P.S.]

AIte rules:

3-4 Bars
3-0 K.O.
No Feeding off Verses

Verses Due as soon as possible

Ill come back spit in bout 20-30 cuz

[ZoNe Tha P.S.]

...::ANOTHER PROBLEM TO BE SOLVED::...

"ZONE'S HOTNESS 2 INTENSE" leave ya chest "O" shaped Homes/~
"EJACULATE ON SKULLS" only way intense can 'CUM OF THA DOME'/~

[WHOLE IN THE O-ZONE LAYER]

This cat cant Quote tha "A.LPHABET" so why expect "B.attle C.ontent from E"/~
Not Even A "PROBLEM WORTH SOLVING" shift blades and "DIVIDE" this 'em-cee'/~

[SELF-EXPLANATORY]

Claimin He's "HARD" but his lyrics are as dull as wet "WOOD" this 'HOE's-Wack'/~
No'Ones told Your lines are played "CLASSICS" I'd suggest u "THROW-BACK"/~

[HARDWOOD CLASSICS IS A BRAND FOR THROWBACK JERSEYS]

"ROTATE PLATE TECTONICS UNDERGROUND" still couldnt leave a crowd "SHOOK"/~
make I "EAT HIS WORDS" by "STUFFIN HIS MOUTH WITH HIS TEXT NOTEBOOK"/~


[PLATE TECTONICS PUSHED TOGETHER AND CAUSE EARTHQUAKES]


ZONED OUT

[Intense It E]

Ayo, I know I ain't spit in a while but this bum is wack
I'll bust a nut on yo spine just so yo keep cummin back/
But if ever came down to it I'm breakin yo dome
I understand yo name cause dudes be rapin yo zone/
Ahhliya told you yo chances nigga one-in-a-million
I'll out the barrel to yo chin and leave yo face on the ceilin/
You can't spit dawg, fuckin just face it
I'll leave you in yo avatar dawg, stuck in the Matrix// TEIH

[Intense It E]

aight uppin

[Intense It E]

somebody vote

[Intense It E]

Can somebody please vote this is my first battle

[Neruda II]

Vote-Zone

Zone-You structured it alright. You made it easy to read, but I felt that the explinations were a bit much. They really weren't that hard to figure out, but I guess for the newbies that are voting, it was nessecary. Your punches, I will admit were original but weren't that great. You had wordplay, which is something that I don't see alot in the FL's. Your vocabulary was actually good. Pretty nice verse. Overall 7/10

Intense-You had played lines, lack luster structure, bad vocabulary, horrible punches, no wordplay, a stupid name, shitty everything. Now I will say that in sentences because it's madatory. Aight your lines were played by far, avy lines suck and have been done to death. Your structure wasn't straight ass, but you had some lines run on too far and it disrupted the flow. Your vocabulary wasn't good. Your punches sucked ass and weren't anything. No wordplay. I hate your name. Everything was bad. 3/10

Vote-Zone

[ZoNe Tha P.S.]

yea i juss wasnt sure how yalls votin system worked and if kids would understand but normally i wouldnt do that...but yea 1-0 uppin

[Samuel Same Old]

OMFG
Both of you used a cum li.
cum lines are the most played lines in the universe.
dont ever use them.
zone came very creative.
next time, just set up your verse from left to right.
centering it made it look gay.
it shorten your lines.

intense came to basic, with even more played lines.
structure was ok, I guess.

v/zone, for coming far more complexed.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...29#post1513829
hit that up.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous

[Samuel Same Old]

OMFG

Intense came wack as fuck.
he used a fuckin cum line.
after that, I already knew his verse was going to be garbage
but he continued on.
which was even more garbage.
he had no creativity.
heck, he barely had any decent punches.
even as a newbie his verse sucked.
he had no multis.
although multis arent really important, but still he lacked them./
the alliyah line sucked ass.
he even spelled her fuckin` name wrong.
and out of the whole battle, his closer was the worst fuckin shit ever.
leave him stuck him the matrix.
WOW, HE REALLY DISSED HIM.
I BET HE FEELS SO INSULTS BY SAYING YOU WILL LEAVE HIM STUCK IN THE MATRIX
Get the fuck ouuta here.
go die you worthless newbie..

and Zobe's verse, that shit wasnt great either, but face it, a pre-schooler could have came better than intense's verse.
Zone set up his verse in a gay way, but he made up in that with punches.
with a lil` bit of wit.
and far less played lines.
he also had complexity, which is always a plus.

thats why Im voting for Zone, because he verse didnt suck as worse as Intense.


http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135529

[ZoNe Tha P.S.]

aite mayne thats 2-0 does it matter if u vote on tha poll or not..anyway uppin 4 tha ko

[jcmini]

Man those were both lame, im a noob n even i can write better than that! i mean check my battle, may not be the best on the planet but i can come up with sum better rymes and tech skills thn tht! i guess i have the deciding vote when i say Zone gets it, but man you didnt deserve it, anyone else wuda kicked yo ass, think yourself lucky that E's worthless! Zone got it 3-0 tis all over.