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Thread: Earth As We Know It .. (With Chrit & C Section)

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    Earth As We Know It .. (With Chrit & C Section)

    Chrit:
    Nonsencial, reprehensible thoughts turn respectable
    Suspensful quandries seem at times uneventful
    To the sinful, audibless tones are an earful
    Monotonous solemness makes draw near to
    You, and with unobstructed missions
    to enact these reflectionless visions
    And conditions met of a hierarchy set
    In place with hypocritical dribble until....
    ...a utopian compromise is met

    Nahlidge:
    Grandfather clock puts the hour hand up for adoption
    Liberty's optics grew blind ..
    .. Selling her reading glasses at an auction
    She's really from Boston, never liked New York's horizon
    Chastizin' colors when vibrant, but they moved off the island
    The rose petal's eye lids, close as the trunk opened
    Frozen sun rays heat the ocean, leaving mother nature lotioned
    The Halo dipped canvas gets broken, on a jealous envy trip
    Kennedy's lip slips out greed as he stuffs himself with emptiness

    C Section:
    Mother natures a virgin, so father moons a visionary
    Their sun burned pills flesh as each becomes secondary
    With out the sun they cant see the mirrors reflection
    But to blind men images are your lifes deception
    In a pond of bad looks and the dead fish dreams
    The captin screams with a puff of smoke screens
    If angels dont have wings serpants cant play mind tricks
    The borders of insanty are think so I dip the pen in the ink origin


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    OMFG....this is fucking great...
    i heard you guys were doing this one like a week ago and i see the preperation

    wow...just wow...

    might be a flow problem here or there but thats it

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    Incredibly Good.
    Chrit..ur first opening bars were bleh...O.d'd a little with the multies and sorta fucked ur flow up. You picked up and finished good. Nahlidge, that was a dope verse, and I have no problems...same with C-section, very good verse and not much of a problem. Too short though, but sweet.
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    I rather enjoyed this piece, as I have become used to seeing chrit in poetic form as of late, although he will deny any poetic prowess. Nice combination of styles and great use of topic.

    C-sections' portion was nice light and airy in tone, made me think of Poe's, the raven, don't know must be the playfully encrypted style of writing. Wanted to keep reading, too short for me, so that just tells you I liked it...

    Nahlidge, I've read a few of your drops before, I think you are showing elevation in this drop, way to go, keep it up. Structure is the only area where there could have been obvious improvements, (same for all) doesn't take away from the piece at all, but would only add a level of asthetic balance, which adds to the over effect of the piece.., In my opinion of course...


    Overall great piece, it's nice to read these types of collabs...
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    so lets see if I got this right:
    C-sec
    so, the moon is the 'perception' mirror...
    without the sun reflecting light off the moon we wouldn't see it
    religion is not what it seems 'angels don't have wings'
    because serpants govern and use it against those who see...
    the blind man is the only one who isn't influenced by his sight
    our reality is flawed by our sight...used by serpents against us
    that's what I gathered from that...interpretation's a bitch...

    Nahlidge
    I didn't really get much from yours until the last line then I kinda formed my interpretaion from there. So lets go from end to start...Kennedy, obvious poke at the former pres. They were a greedy fam... made their fortune off bootlegging mostly...cool wit me...
    the rose petal, which represents purity, closed its eyes to what it was seeing...it was seeing freedom leave the island in the form of time and the statue...freedom and time...married. The idea that in due time ('hour hand up for adoption') freedom will be gone...
    It originated in Boston, proly refering to some point in history that was significant to freedom's origin...I don't know...?

    Chrit:
    at times it seemed like some of your ideas or words contradicted one another...and I guess poetry is about that, cause life is a contradiction, right?
    strong vocab...lil hard to follow at first, until I pieced the words together...
    politics...hierarchy set are the politicians wit their dribble...
    claiming the 'utopia' project is underway...but wat does utopia mean to them?
    "You, and with unobstructed missions
    to enact these reflectionless visions"
    secret missions and wars yield no true reward...like a reflectionless mirror...aka vision.

    whatchall think? Was I close? If not lemme know...it'd be cool to get break-down of your shit, b/c I could come up with at least 3 different scenerios off the top o' my head...but I figured I'd stick with the first that came to mind...

    good shit from all 3 writers...I'll be lookin forward to reading more, especially collabs...3 different perspectives and styles...the shit...
    peace

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    Um... this was tight... most poetic and refreshing piece I have ever seen... DOOPE..!

















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    Upping over all the closed shit .. Can we get some more feedback?

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    you spin me right round baby right round like a record baby right right round round

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    there isn't really much wrong with this collab...except chrit went haywire with the knowledge lol...nice visuals and good messege in this...all down respectablly well...keep droppin

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