this is good man
i really enjoy reading your battles and topicals
you got text talent, i dunno about audio
but this is good, rhymes good and the multies are nice
drop more often, and PM me the links
this is good man
i really enjoy reading your battles and topicals
you got text talent, i dunno about audio
but this is good, rhymes good and the multies are nice
drop more often, and PM me the links
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This was decent. Nothing wrong with it except that it was a little short. But, then again, your Baron Mynd, anything you write is good. lol. Nice job.
Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it
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Ha, made me chuckle. Good stuff, I did get the rhyme scheme and to me it came smooth. Message was an easy concept, about materialism and maybe it even has something to do with some one you know in real life.
It wasn't too deep, and not too strong, very in the middle. But hell, mediocracy is better than horrible. I liked the way you didn't take the subject to an incredibly serious level and decided to keep it calm and collective. Vocabulary wasn't at its best, very simple, but it didn't take to much away from the piece because it was all smoothed out. I liked the piece for what it was, it could have been better, or it could have been worse. Luckily, it was just right.
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yea dog i wus feelin that lil verse u spit dog, had sum multis up n it
cus if it aint multis n a verse i don't even really take the time 2 read the whole thing
so i like that and, the topic wus unique 2 n i could relate 2 that , so keep it up my nig
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