Human's nature

[Neruda II]

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[Neruda II]

Feedback please. I did give ya'll some. Drop a link kids, I'll give feedback back.

[Mistral]

its 2 links now man.

[Neruda II]

aight, fixed.

[Telekinetic]

I like this it was pretty good. Had a nice style to it, not your basic scheme.
You really had your own thing going. Props to you for that. The whole thing sounded pretty deep. More poetic than rap really. Nice style of writting in the first two lines.
The only thing I can really tell you is to do is make it more clear where your going with it. Expand on your ideas and it would make it better. But overall good job.

[Neruda II]

Thank you, very appreciated. *puts tele on my reply to list* Now whenever you got a new drop, just PM me and I'll give feedback. The feedback was good, ill try broadening my concept.

[Telekinetic]

Hey bro if you don't care check this new drop out. Thanks man.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129641
Sorry it took me so long to get back at ya.

[pacaso mac]

no hatin , but dog i aitn really n 2 the vocab thing
i like it simple man, but i guess thats yo style so other than that
let people know whut u spittin bout, this wus straight, nigga 1

[Neruda II]

Uppin