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10 lines max
no cheating
due in 30 after your check in
good luck
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"Aces" I seen ya wack topicals They look smiliar the lyrics of Naz...
But bitch my flows will add color to yo avatar like if it was The Wizard Of OZ...
Everyone aces masterbates, he wants sex so much he has to commit slaughter..
Your Flows is weak,imma give ya some boxing gloves so ya punches can hit harder
Ya fagget ass nigga my flows will make Ya feel pain worser than ya say ouch...
My flows will make you move into Sesimi's Streets trashcan wit Oscer The Crouch
He is still on his baby stage makin beggin for a battle and makin his shaker rattle
"Aces" Everyone knows you can Flow to stay yo bitch ass to a Topical Battle......
Nigga Ill give ya another chance no signatures attached.......
But if ya want to lose again Pm me,Set it up in front lines,and set up a rematch
Good luck Deck of cards..OOPS I mean aces of aces!
Check it…
Dumbass can’t even check in, I was still waiting to key this
But im more of an idiot to think I’d need 30 mins to beat his
Ya verse is more fake then ya name, what the hell is Illitical?
Prolly your code name that states your the opposite of critical
You’re pitiful, coming out more played then Grand Theft Auto
Sorry but your punches missed like the people that you follow
Your on full throttle and yet you’re about as fast as me walking
I’m still shocked about the fact that your gayass can be talking
We both have just one loss, that’s something we can relate too
But unlike me all you have is a 0 on the left to compensate you
i dont get the deck of cards thing. anyway, nice battle.
uppin.
ace-nyce verse............your punches was good.........you came wit some wittyness in this verse and that is always a good thing..........your personals was hard hitting and direct to the point.......koed him wit jus wun of your personal lines.........structure was alot better then his.......over all good
illitical-your verse was ummmmmm yeah..........structure was fucked man...........lines was stretched but i will give you wun thing......you kept them even but they was still stretched eitha way...........kinda looks like you prewrite your shit cause there was no direct punches towards ace that i saw other then the deck of cards shit but that wasnt even really a punch or personal........all i really saw in this verse was a bunch of fillers and half assed attempts at punches.......no hate kid jus elevate
v/ace
to the top again. thanx for the vote.
and again...
did someone poll their vote wrong or is it my computer?
Smh, vote-Ace
Ace had better punches, better personals, and was creative, had a better flow.....just consistent disses that beat Illitical easily...he got to the point with effectiveness which made this battle one-sided
Illitical..work on harder punches....better personals..creativity...step outside the box..try to find something about your opponent that isnt so obvious..you damn near complimented him with your first line...i wouldnt be too offended if you said my style was like Nas....
AI. Legendary.
19x HOF. Seven Titles. 50.
vote ace for a few reasons harder punches for a start..
and the other kids was wack no flow as lines wer strechd and
a wack structure seriously imprve that man not good....
so overall ace came alot harder...vote ace
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Dope Period.
Flash polled for the wrong person.
Also, his vote will not be counted for,
due to the fact that he's in your crew
ILLunatic v.s sdizzle
Punches - Ace
Personals - Ace
Wittyness - Neither
Flow - Ace
Structure - Ace
Vote - Ace of Aces
After reading that.. i knew this verse was gonna be wackOriginally Posted by .ILLITICAL.
You tried using personals, but you gave them no effort to hit hard
You also had 0 punches...
Honestly.. i really didn't get this part
"flows will make Ya feel pain worser than ya say ouch..."..
You completely lost me at that
Man.. elevate plz.. you really need it
Work on the structure too...
Good way to start it off.. witty, and decent personal
Your punches were a bit complex, not your best though
Your flow was way more clearer than .ILLITICAL. also.
NICE FINISHER.. Hard solid punch
that was prolly my favorite bar...
vote illitical
explanation- good battle by both.. nice that yall used some personals in this battle.. illiticals disses hit harder man.. he had some clever punchlines and personals that stole the show in this battle.. these lines were funny
"Everyone aces masterbates, he wants sex so much he has to commit slaughter..
Your Flows is weak,imma give ya some boxing gloves so ya punches can hit harder"
illitical verse was filled with actuall disses .. while ace of aces was just a bunch of personals without any real hard hitting disses..
like i said illitical took the diss category cuz it seemed like he came harder at ace than ace did to him.. illitical i also felt came better with the punchlines.. his lines had some cleverness to his that aces didnt.. also i felt like some of aces lines were kind of conry.. like that line about grandtheft auto was extrememly weak.. and the line bout walking wasnt really a hard diss.. illitical had ace with better disses in this battle thats why i vote for him
hit this battle up if you guys get the chance
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