Fubar Vs :)

[FUBAR]

12 lines maximum,
no hate votes,
no dickridding votes,
verses due in next 30 minutes if their not posted in the next 30 minutes then we both have before midnight in which to vote
I'll spit first...

[Under Dawg]

aiight then post first.. uppin....................

[FUBAR]

I don't even need to diss you at all smiley, Your fucking rhymes do it for me//
Die through laugher cuss you blew your opportunity, to try and diss me//
I saw your age smilley, You must of had a hard time through puberty//
Cuss your palms were to sweaty to hide, You can try to get made at me//
But your only make a fool of yourself, 'cuss i place your sorry ass back onto the shelf//
I'm the master of disaster, I fuck you up quicker than Eemcee Hammer's new styles//
You'll be filed into my cabinet for a loser with out hope//
Fools see you as a bi standard, you'll get rejected by the pope//
Your battle record doesn't scare me, It's your lack of stupidity//
I'll bring you to the floor quicker than a fat ass whore breakin your knees//
Buy some lubrication just so you can do some more masterbation//
Die loser, the anticipation of seein you get slaughtered by my aggression//

[Under Dawg]

man what the fuck is this.. fubar.. ahh fuck you man.. check it
kid your about to become another TEXT FATALITY, your whole verse is filled with GAY references.. bitch check your own SEXUALITY
any one of your battle wins gotta be based on dickridding VOTES
cuz mothafucka you've never been DOPE,
bout the only traces of "manhood" that can be found in your body is down your THROAT (sperm)
and i dont need to do any research to find your pictures SON
cuz your whole families portrait is two clicks away at uglypeople.COM
your a dumbass.. and thats a fact, your logic just doesnt LINE STRAIGHT
you could obtain a higher IQ than your by testing a PRIME APE ..lol
smarts? you have non, you cant even spell WELL IN YOUR THREADS
theres a higher probablity of winning the lottery than finding brain CELLS IN
YOUR HEAD
just bow down kid my RECORD IS STRONGER
i cant even rate your skills on a scale of 1 to 10 cuz id need to use NEGATIVE
NUMBERS

ahh fuck it

[Under Dawg]

lol no dickridding votes.. peace people...........

[MCrepresenta]

i think i mite have to give this one too smiley
some of the stuff u wrote fubar didn't really make sense
and im not all about structure n stuff like that, but i mean to rap you gotta make sense know what im sayin? but both of yalls punchlines was strate, but smiley got you on this one, good battle the both of yous
1

[Under Dawg]

yeah aiiht uppin for people that can actually poll vote on this shit.. leave links to your battles if you want..

[Under Dawg]

damn.. still no poll votes yet.. uppin..................

[kool-killa]

and i dont need to do any research to find your pictures SON
cuz your whole families portrait is two clicks away at uglypeople.COM

ahaha! woah that was fire smiley...won the damn battle for me...although the rest of the verse wasnt that good. fubar elevate man, you flow is elementary and your punches arent hitting right.

pay back the favor and check my battles:

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125938

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...25#post1356725

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[FUBAR]

But i did every thing right.....
I used some multies and made some personals,
and I even used some references.

I just don't understand.....Do I have to just tell him off just plain agressively?
and not change my flow not one time???I just don't understand.....

[Nique.]

Both of you need to elevate. And Fubar, you're starting to elevate a lot from the battles you've posted before and against me to the one now, but there are still no direct punches and your attempted one's aren't effective. You need to work on your creativity. Open your eye's to the world. Notice more thing's in life. Notice thing's on T.V...thats how I make my punches. Just be knowledgable..


Smiley- You need to elevate too dawg, but atleast most of your punches made sense and they were a little more effective then Fubar's..you also need to work on creativity..be more wittier..find something that YOU KNOW no one has ever seen before...

Overall, I feel that Smiley won because of comprehension, not necessarily effective punches. And fubar, keep elevating, because you're getting better by the day..but....


Vote-Smiley

Check out my battles..

Action vs Odd
Action vs UnParalled

Polled.
-Axe

[Trivia101]

aight basic breakdown

Fubars verse
I don't even need to diss you at all smiley, Your fucking rhymes do it for me//
Die through laugher cuss you blew your opportunity, to try and diss me//
I saw your age smilley, You must of had a hard time through puberty//
Cuss your palms were to sweaty to hide, You can try to get made at me//
But your only make a fool of yourself, 'cuss i place your sorry ass back onto the shelf//
I'm the master of disaster, I fuck you up quicker than Eemcee Hammer's new styles//
You'll be filed into my cabinet for a loser with out hope//
Fools see you as a bi standard, you'll get rejected by the pope//
Your battle record doesn't scare me, It's your lack of stupidity//
I'll bring you to the floor quicker than a fat ass whore breakin your knees//
Buy some lubrication just so you can do some more masterbation//
Die loser, the anticipation of seein you get slaughtered by my aggression//

ok that wuz the wackest ish I/ve ever heard

Smiley's verse
man what the fuck is this.. fubar.. ahh fuck you man.. check it
kid your about to become another TEXT FATALITY, your whole verse is filled with GAY references.. bitch check your own SEXUALITY
any one of your battle wins gotta be based on dickridding VOTES
cuz mothafucka you've never been DOPE,
bout the only traces of "manhood" that can be found in your body is down your THROAT (sperm)
and i dont need to do any research to find your pictures SON
cuz your whole families portrait is two clicks away at uglypeople.COM
your a dumbass.. and thats a fact, your logic just doesnt LINE STRAIGHT
you could obtain a higher IQ than your by testing a PRIME APE ..lol
smarts? you have non, you cant even spell WELL IN YOUR THREADS
theres a higher probablity of winning the lottery than finding brain CELLS IN
YOUR HEAD
just bow down kid my RECORD IS STRONGER
i cant even rate your skills on a scale of 1 to 10 cuz id need to use NEGATIVE
NUMBERS

ok that ish was hot and made tha battle onesided

Flow/smiley
Creativity/smiley
Diss/smiley
Entertainment/smiley
Diss/both
Multies/fubar
personals'fubar

aight my vote goes to smiley no hate hit my ish up with sabotage,
the link is in tha sig

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[Dope Name]

Punches:
Flow: None
Personals: None
Metas:
Multies: Fubar
Creativity:
Enjoyment:

Explination: Neither had any flow, I've seen you do wayyyyyyyy better before, way way way way better, Fubar, some of your lines made no sense and had no interest to me, they were whack and nothing interesting, work on it, and try to fin any personals that you can...

Quotables:

: and i dont need to do any research to find your pictures SON
cuz your whole families portrait is two clicks away at uglypeople.COM

only one, still nothing too special

[Lil Es]

Fubar's improved a little since last time, almost didn't seem he was writing that aat all... he had some wack punches, wack multi's and, just didnt get thru to me at all.
some of the shit you said i didnt even understamd

i thought had some nice punches, nice opening, nice finish, over all a well rounded battle.
it was original and enjoyable..

my vote:

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[Lil Es]

oh yeah... karma fellas

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125652