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And1Mix
Cjilla a.k.a Cj
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Checkin in ...i'll drop mine soon...........................
Okay, Okay i feel like doing a long one...
I make your best attempt look fuckin incredibly weak
Flow with inconceivable speed to bleed this weed into a perpetual sleep
Fuckin geek your mother got fucked with miniature dicks to spawn a miserable seed
Lyrically Vs me you get left behind like struggling spastics with severely special needs
I thrust curse words at herbs, lay cuts on dumb fucks who lust butts
Leave you entangled in an endless labyrinth of lyrics you can’t touch
Supreme, destroying whatever you bring seeing as you ride dicks like your diminutive cock rings
I leave MC’s in fear of response, just follow my track record
I leave your entire approach in the past, streamlining your style like art deco
Fuck it lets go punch for punch I pitter patter on plastic rappers lacking in subject matter
Faggots get shattered your previous posts all flow like a fuckin stammer
I’ll hammer your tear drenched face with a jack knife in front of your grand mama
Acting like your ‘bad’, but that only rings true in your fuckin grammar
I locate you in hell and throat fuck you with a dying lepers last leg
You gotta be fucked in the head to wanna post up in a Cjilla battle thread
Now ya dead and gone cause I’m far to quick with my lyrical tongue
Stringing this villian up by his thong for tryna cover up his pussy like a fuckin sarong
Dead wrongs how I come every time I bust a fuckin verse at a pathetic MC
Every mutha fucker on this site wants to be live as me
So where do you come into the fuckin equation? The sole of my feet is all your gonna be facing
Battlin me i leave your heart racing, everyone sayin ‘yo and1mix aced him’ cause every wack ass word in your fuckin post’ll need replacing to come near the verse I just spat that left your face caved in.
nice verse here I go
Punch after Punch might as well call this a boxing match
How you gonna write a pussy verse with Voice of the Streetz attached
Just like a clock with no batteries you out of time
I'll shoot you in tha throat/yo voice is gone/Now the Steetz are mine
Its hard for you to battle with no biting and no feeding
U fucking kid I can tell you still teething
While I'm a gentleman and a emcee with class
I'll leave you dirty and foul like an unwiped ass
Im a plastic rapper well you a upbeat fag
Fuck around wit my grandmotha I'll choak you with plastic bag
Im in the top of my class while yo a fuckin cheater
I measure my dick by inches you measure yours by centimeters
yeah my heart is racing but yours is litteraly flyin
Then it stops............now yo family members are cryin
Like a round of applause Im about to start clappin
U suck man!!!!!! George W. Bush got a betta chance at rappin
Sit boy now u a dog I'll call you Rover
oh And1 more thing your Mix is over
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ok pretty good battle guys both verse were ok
and1mix - nice verse man, u had some good personals and you hit very hard with ur punches. played a few of ur lines, ya wordplay and multiples are decent man. verse was pretty long but u did come hard in most of the bars 8/10
djilla - nice verse also, you had some ok punches and some o0k personals but some were a lil played, you didnt come as hard as and1 but still some of ur personals made me laugh. 7/10
overal all nice of the both of ya but and1 takes this one.
and1mix- Your verse was very good. But i thought it was long. But your punches were better then cjillas. Wordplay and multiples were good. But your structure you might wanna work on. Verse was long but it had better punches so thats way you get my vote.
cjilla- you had also a nice verse. but and1's i thought was better. punches were decnet but and1's was better i thought. personals were very good. but and1 came harder then you so thats why he got vote. but personals were better then and1.
vote-andmix
Vote on my battle it's like a month old
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iight this is how i sees it
and1-you had an okay verse....your shit wasgood....nnice punches they hit when they needed bu you could work on them alil bit...your structure was okay and your flow was together.
cj-your verse was okay.....you had some okay punches.....not really to brag about they hit okay not really that hard....your verse was good overall.....flow was together....structure could use sum work other then htat your shit was good
v/and1-----better verse overall
hit this battle up with an honest vote.....first is a topical other is a text battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116185
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...31#post1328031
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And1: Your verse was wayy too longHaving said that though, it was decent. You had some decent punches here and there, but some of them didn't hit directly enough. You didn't really have any true personals which was a minus, and your flow was a little choppy, but you still came pretty nice overall.
Cjilla: I wasn't feeling your verse too much. Your punches, when they hit directly, were played to the max and were simple. You had some personals but they weren't good. Flow was off too.
v/ And1 for a harder-hitting and overall superiour verse. And1, poll the vote in my match vs. Mumble and hit up Cjilla if you haven't already.
cjilla- ur verse was aight. ur punches were aight, personels made me giggle a lil inside. ur flow and structure was ass though. its like u came too....sofT. yea a capital T.
and1mix- ur verse was nice. ur punches and personels hit alot harder than cjilla's did. ur flow and structure was good. but u one this one because u came harder.
vote: and1mix
did u vote for mah other battle? not sure
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
Da KiD iS iN dA FoRuM BUiLdInG!!!!!!!!!!!!
Andone- Your shit was way too long. But your vocab was nice an the level
of your verse was higher. Came with some original shit props for that.
Punches were pretty good none that were great tho.
CJ- Your shit was ok some things I thought were basic. Alot of your punches seemed to be missing slightly. They werent direct. Your personals were better. Liked the last line that was a nice play off his name
OVERALL- Good battle. But I think And one got this. Won me over with quility of vocab an with a more tecnical verse
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