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spit withing the next 2 hours
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Krem
flash
topic rules
45 lines max
spit withing the next 2 hours
check in immediatly...
topic is-sympathy....and no hate d/r or crew votes....jus straight up votes and all votes have to have explanations....pc
checkin
but 2 hours hell no
it's 4 am here dudes going to bed here in lik 5 mins
45 lines jesus we ain' writing a book
i just want a quick battle dawg
make it like 25 lines max
yeah 25 lines dont matta to me...let me know if you down
and if you gonna do it before you peace out
Aight cool 25 lines, but i'm bout to pass out, so i'll drop tomorrow aight
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fuck it im jus gonna do the orignal 45 and you drop whateva you wanna drop when you wake up...shit due 24 hours though...pc
this is my check in and my shit....
SYMPOTHY:
I was an outsider.. recognition was seldom
a situation that was prior.. to a hope i'd tell them
When those felt mis-guided.. i'd aid them
the service i provided.. didn't phase them
Mind, i didn't.. just glad i was reliable
nothing wrong with it.. but liable
it was the same to me.. alive, but i knew to die
then a man came to me.. w. issues of suicide
gun in his palm.. i soothed his wrong
I remained him calm.. made him feel like he belonged
It wasn't a fake dream.. just confronted life too quick
n' so he thanked me.. n' went home to his wife n' kids
Then I ran into a runaway.. n' the hole he crawled in
i asked him what he done today.. n' his problems
he opened up to me.. told me what he was feeling
Told me what he was s'pose to be.. n' things he found appealing
He didn't want to stay.. in the family he'd fail to be..
though the clouds are gray.. they stay co-ensigned w/ reality
He accepted my advice.. no longer felt broke
"thanks your real nice".. and ventured back home..
crept to a bench, be it vile.. thanked what he had
Looked to the sky, smiled.. n' put the newspaper over his back
No one knew my name.. not that it chastised me
I would remain.. as long as those recognize me..
aiding was worth it.. as long as his spirit were colors
n' it was his sole purpose.. to give his life for others
A late day in the winter.. he'd search leaves n' cans
but got up un-hindered.. to help a troubled man
the man holding a gun.. another suicide case
he started to run.. as he seen the look on his face
His legs ran steady.. at the mis-lead person
i knew he was ready.. n' this time it was urgent
"DONT DO IT!" i yelled.. he jerked his neck
he replied 'I belong in hell.. for things i cant forget..
"Dont waste you life.. whats your name?i've never heard of ya?"
Take my life?.. sir, im a murdera.. (shot at the man)
People wondered.. but lacked the notion
By mid-summer.. they had finally noticed
Men at the funeral who came.. cried drops to there toes
"what was his name".. nobody knows...........
Live For Good Morals, Know The Truth
Instead Of Sympathizing For YourSelf,
Sympathize For Those Who Sympathize For You
what happend to 25 lines? whatever i'll drop today
Sympathy is what we have for each and one another
when ya feelin down people confront you like a brother
it's a feeling where it's right to share your emotions
when it's alright to let those tears start flowin
sharing pain to let people know how you feel
like when you lose a friend, it's the real deal
feeling pity but trying not to emphasize how much you sympathize
towards a good friend that's going through rough times
trying your best to keep everything on the down lo
but still trying to say how much you really care tho
**Past**
He rememberd times when things were looking grim
but help shortly came to his side "cheer up slim"
everyone was there showing him they really cared
he returned the favor showing the feelings he shared
he was complentating suicide with a kinfe by his side
lost all my pride, feeling like shit deep inside
couldn't provide he was denied, though he tried
wanted to die, when the knife and wrist collide
just when kinfe got into hand she walked in
she ran in, grabbed the knife, the crying begin
**Present**
Since that day, somehow he had transformed
a strong relationship with this girl had formed
he said that he was always gonna be there for her
but then, the worst had to happen, it had to occur
she got shot while tying to defend from a no good mugger
he wasn't there, now she's dead, he can't hug her
now's he sits in jail cause he used a bat called slugger
because he finally found that guy who mugged her
**The End**
Sympathy goes along way in the world today
being there for one another makes the day
sympathize for everyone and be there
don't let a moment waste, show you care
show them your love, so them the truth
show them you care, so them with proof
don't waste time.....think about it
uppin for some votes............................................. ..................
uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
drop a link!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u both had some mad lines and u got some skill
but im goin with flash
i cant vote but if i could it would goto flash
uppin #3
can we get some votes in here
drop links and i'll reply
peace..........................
uppin #4
can we please get some votes up in here
drop a link and i'll vote on one of your battles
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