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Thread: Alpha-bet- "Swoop Dance"....some body rockin' shit...

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    D-Dizzle
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    Alpha-bet- "Swoop Dance"....some body rockin' shit...

    Whuttup doe...

    Got this joint I did when I tripped up on a classic break...so I banged it up right quick and just wild out on it...on some party and bullshit emcee shit....

    I got thought provoking lyrical shit, but I like to dumb out sometime too so that whats this songs for......

    enjoy it and drop some feedback too....

    Swoop Dance

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    .D. CYPHA
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    feedback is on swoop dance -tight voice- delivery is on point, you coulda came a little tighta on the hook tho, lyracs is tight! overall good quality
    return the favor and drop some feedback on any of the audios that say .D. CYPHA-they are all artist i promote. check out imperial 1st tho-peace

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/imperial1music.htm

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    D-Dizzle
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    Thanks dood, I'll peep your shit out.....

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    S.O.L.D. ENTERTAINMENT BLuNT's Avatar
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    This beat is fuckin' DOPE fa real... you got a mad obie style, flow an' delivery... somethin' bout the beat drown's out ya voice... "This my sheit..." lol.... man, yea lyrics is tite.... "stolen credit card..."... trus me, i know that shit.... 1
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    Dikk Dastadly
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    The beat is dope, your flowin nice, lyrics are good, some nice lines, your delivery is good too, your voice sounds sick with this beat. hook is aiight, overall this is a nice track, i'm feelin it.

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    Nice beat and Nice voice.....your flow is nice your lyrics have great presence and your lyrics are basic but if its a club banger/ party shit you don't need much.....lol i like the chorus...you might wanna try to get a girl to say this my shit you gotta know some....aight man tight good production...Bang on the table homey.....7/10
    pz....
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    Ah shit this a dope beat... your way of rapping is new to me I havent heard anyone rap like that. This is a good song your working with but I feel maybe you could have made the hook a bit more catchy but it is good anyway. Nice Drop

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121273

    Return the fav...

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    D-Dizzle
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    Thanks for peepin' folks, I'll return the favor for the cats that dropped links....

    Yhea DeMirurgi I was thinking that same thing earlier that I should put a girl on the "thats my shit" part to bring it out..instead of me tryna do impersinations(sp?) and all.....

    I just gotta be careful some hoe don;t be trying to want 5% if I ever decide to put it on something and shit.....

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    D-Dizzle
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    upperness......

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