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KOP of Audible is one the beat with Blaze doing the intro and me Haze rapping and doing the outro.
Drop ya links.... I gotta go to class but I'll hit ya up when I get back.
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KOP of Audible is one the beat with Blaze doing the intro and me Haze rapping and doing the outro.
Drop ya links.... I gotta go to class but I'll hit ya up when I get back.
bombaclat idiots....jk aight the beat is good.....your vocals are little low your flow is on point ...your lyrics are a little sub par.....you sound like cash money at times......which is really not a good thing...laid back gangsta shit...TURN THE VOCALS UP.....ok overall good short piece...5/10 pz...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120194
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
Returning the favor....
Well honest opinion...your lyrics is kinda basic...your one-liners and all is kinda corny,
The beat is kinda generic Lil Jon....but sayin all that...
I can see certain nigggas likin' this though..especially you said you was from Miami adn it definitly got the south feel to it...
but Imma tell you like this..on the 'net you not gon get good reaction, it's just not the type of style the goes over good..but I know plenty of niggas who would dig this though....
So for what it is..it's decent...my opionin is you gonna have to zero in on your target audience with your type of style....keep doin you though and keep at it......
beat isn't lil jon style...this beat is horrorcore.I like it...
1st verse is ok...delivery isn't really special tho...lyrics aren't that good either...but it sounds professional...even tho the vocals are just a little low....no hook..so for a song I give it a 7/10.....w/ about 2 more minutes and a hook, this would be a lot better...
peace
I.J.L.
straight track dawg...this was pretty nice...
not the most intelligent but fuck it, i like ur style...
keep at it! plenty of peeps would feel u and ur homies beats...
~1~
even if u were crucified you couldn't hang
this is the rewrite
THE MANIFESTO
Listening
Yeah i like the beat...Intro is ok...cant understand some of the shit he is saying...
Verse:
^^lol nice...and funnyOriginally Posted by Haze.
i would quote more but it is kind of hard to hear what your saying....maybe up your DB a bit.....quality is pretty good......flow is good and delivery is good....nice multis and vocabulary....not really a real song..no hook....you started off nicely then towards the end you fell off...but its happened to everyone.....
Flow - Very Good
Vocab - Very Good
Multis - Good
Quality - Good
Overall - up your volume in your vocals...thats about all i can say that i disliked...the rest was pretty tight work actually....pretty good track overall....
Rating
7/10
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Hmm so ya saying I'm basic? To be pretty honest i could write that complex shit but then I would be like the rest of net cats. Anyway I know this is done in the name of improving overall as a artist. I dunno after you peep this song peep Last Breath I doubt you will come back and say the same thing. Stay Up...
Beat was nice .. Intro was cooh .. Rasta = Dope .. Beat is sick .. Im feelin it a lot .. Your verse was pretty nice .. A little low on the mix .. Shoulda put the verse up a bit more .. Besides that it was cooh .. Lyrics wasn't on no amazing ish .. Average .. But delivery was straight .. Keep at it .. One
A.i
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Str8 TrACC. You got good delivery
flows cool, decent lyrics, and the
beat was nice. Decent track overall.
KDotI
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The Rebirth
Thanks for the feedback fellas...
Yhea I peeped it, and I pretty much sayin the same thing
When I say basic I'm talking about HOW you saying it not to much what you sayin'..cuz I like your content on Last Breath, that song is real shit, like that better than the other song..but your delivery and all that is just stright-up, not to much style to it....basic flow and delivery...
But It seem like you was taking it as a diss, thats why I said if thats you then coo..everybody don;t have to be no dictonary rappers, and supa wordplay emcces or no shit....I understand that, but I'm just sayin what I thought when I heard your song, giving my tru honest opinion my nigga, cuZ like you said this is what we postin for.....
That wouldnt be helping you out if I just got on here talking "Yhea I love this" just because I want to you to peep my shit and give a good review...I give my thoughts and opinions and hope you keep doin your thang and imporving, me, you ain;t nobody above learning, cuz even your favorite rapper is allways trying to elevate... your only good as your last song.....
So like I said your shit ain;t wack...and your shit is high quality..but Id be lying to you dog if I said your song was perfect and nothing I think you can touch up..thats all
Dizzle I feel that. I see what your getting and I accept what is I need to improve on. I ain't been rapping to long(Going on two years). As for the lyrics and stuff I can and will improve but thanks alot.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121803
can u return the favor?
I.J.L.
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