kautious vs yo yo yo

[Chemarim]

10 lines

no hate votes
dick riders
crew votes ( if your in one)
and nooooo biteing/feeding or recycleing

[YO YO YO]

yo yo yo is just check check check innnnnnnnnnnng innnn

[Chemarim]

aight it's blind spit so when eva you wanna drop

deadline is 30 minutes from now

if late it's because i was watching freestyle friday

[YO YO YO]

ya i heard............................................. ......

[YO YO YO]

Pucker up sucker.. anotha losin mothafucka...Put ur flag in ur handbag...u stupid slag
come 2 fright..and fight..4 u the future aint bright..coz im dimmin ur light!
They say lifes a bitch in dis case its da opposite! aint it snow white!
dont belong on dis site...take a right...click on x and get da hell out of thuglife!
Kautious u just ball less...im up wid da mic..u down suckin dick...
If u were a rapper u would join daffy and bugs on the looney tunes!
u belong on cartoons...u words stink so bad they may call them fartoons!
I come wid words from the nxt level...u words still dont cum hotta than mines devil!
earn a rep..trying to beat a future vet...break ur neck so u can look back in regret!
Dis battle is set....u lost afta drroling in sweat..afta seein dis threat

[YO YO YO]

mistake on last line dat word is meant to say drooling ..............

[YO YO YO]

hurry up ive been waitin 4 ages.....u puttin me 2 sleep

[YO YO YO]

i spat in 30 mins......did u watch freestyle friday...or freaky friday cuz u actin like a bitch!

[Chemarim]

Dam kid I can see what your ur-gence is but on opposite occurrences
I came back to burn retina surfaces |
Bare irrepressible ammunition on em with no explained purposes
Put a blast on the clown like cannons from circuses|

Swiftly - Murk this kid~ I still ain’t hurd you yet, so go fuck yea dam self! |
Like a dead man I’ll scrap yea health, you’ll get wasted like a poor niggas wealth|

Have you thinking you felt scripts of biblical meaning, put the holy ghost on you |
Fuck respirators I’ll lay yea lungs flat in yea ~ permanently breathless upon you |

Score his body like the atmosphere blazed by meteoric hitz~ im astronomical |
Your text is fucking comical boy but you couldn’t reach me in the “apolo” ! |


= explenation =
3rd | = his sig

any others just ask

[Girondo]

oh snap crackle pop boom bang you all suck like toooters in the sun..

[Girondo]

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[-KareLess-]

aight neither of you were Great..
I liked both your flows a littel bit though..


Katiuos..your Ryme schem was Better..
your Punches were Funnier..And Disses were
MORE COMPLEX..And vocab was Better as well..


yo..
your punches werent bad, but needs to be funnier....
your flow was choppy and needed work..
your punches could have been worded better too..
BUT YOIU HAVE THE IDEA...


POLL vote_____Katiuos

[Ace of Aces]

not bad.

yo- i didn't like your verse. your punches didn't connect. it seems like you tried to get the lines to rhyme and that was it. not too good. the flow was ok and the structure was outta whack. try working on that. change your style so you actually get hits. 5/10

kautious- coulda took this one with just the first couple of bars. the the punches hit much better then his. they actually made sense. and your flow was dope with all of those multies. nice job. 8/10

vote- kautious...better flow and punches

hit this up in return plz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119176

thanx

peace

[..:: SpOrTzDiScIpLe™::..]

yo yo yo - ya verse was plain weak u didnt have good punchlines, u aint try to put multies, and u didnt have good flow, ur overall was weak u need to elebate.4.5/10

kautious: u had it wit the first couple of bars, u at least tried to put mutlies, and punchlines, u had good flow , and good structure :8/10

yo yo yo lines :

Kautious u just ball less...im up wid da mic..u down suckin dick...
If u were a rapper u would join daffy and bugs on the looney tunes!
u belong on cartoons...u words stink so bad they may call them fartoons!

kautious:

Swiftly - Murk this kid~ I still ain’t hurd you yet, so go fuck yea dam self! |
Like a dead man I’ll scrap yea health, you’ll get wasted like a poor niggas wealth

breakdown:
flow:k
multies:k
punchlines:k
enjoy readin:k
overall vote goes to kautious
please return the favor im going to drop a link and vote in that battle honestly and ill drop my poll vote okay

[..:: SpOrTzDiScIpLe™::..]

okay herr my link please vote both of use honest vote , and ill drop my poll vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119199