10-15 lines
15 mins tp spit afta check in
no d/r, crew, hate, or biting
good luck, may the best BOI win
Shortay140
Yaaa-Boi
10-15 lines
15 mins tp spit afta check in
no d/r, crew, hate, or biting
good luck, may the best BOI win
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checkin in................ my 15 minutes starts now
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Well, shortay, you kow we tight....."What?" asks the crowd...haha ya right, time ta fight
check it
Man, im dialin numbers like bill gates counts his in green, im callin my crew
im callin my killas cuz im lazy, they commin to dispose of you bitch...run bitch, shoo!
After thats settled im spookin ya family, im the boogiman im commin silent and scary
my name is Benidict, Terry and im playin wit notin to loose, im single aint gettin maried
Bitch, bow down...this aint preschool shit, literally, quit discracin urself
quit shitin in ur diapers, wtf is that? cookies? jesus man quit fukin wit da kiebler elf
and put the cookie jar right back on the shelf that you stole it from you little thief
you been steelin since you wer young and you still aint learned nothin, why u think that
i made rules of the verses so brief?
Just one last word to this tarheel BITCH, go pick out wut ull be beatin with: a belt, myOriginally Posted by shortay140
hand, or maybe a switch...off the tree, and its no! u pleed
but im not ganna stop till u quit cryin and grow up and get a life other than "pimpin"..
....................until your wonder years...keep bleedin!
bitch...
good enough i guess...
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okay okay but didnt u say 10-15 lines ??
dont u think thats alittle to much stop breakin ur own rules
that like 20 lines
but w/e ima drop in a couple of min just give me some time ima start to key iight peace
thats 12, the words that went off dont count as a whole new line. Good luck bra
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can't compete with best verses where quotes-and riddles-linger//
you cudnt get the "upper hand" if you asked for votes-with-middle-fingers!* //
calling my self the best is the only way to stress-my-level//
you can bite my bars all day and still wont test-my-mettle//![metal]
dropping the skill-in-scrolls livin for no reason? i'll kill-these-souls//
boi's dreams are empty he'll never be able to fullfill-his-goals!//*
my techniques-are-malice wicked puchlines seek-and-damage //
i reak-with-talent sick flows designed to reap-the-challenge//
if Adam is Gods image of perfection then nature made you to keep-the-ballance//
fuck it i'll start to strangle these vets go for it bitches wanna tangle on text?//
i'll kill you so many times that i'll get hated on by the angel-of-death!//
what purpose you serve in this battle bitch? how are you employed in?//
fucked with your girl so many times she declared my dick a boyfriend!//
iight uppin for vote on this ...............................1
lol, jus noticed i put pleed instead of pleedin...o well, im stupid
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lol ^^^^
Hmmm.... two MC's I know well....
Yaa-Boi: Your verse was not somethin' to impress. I mean, I've seen so much better shit from you, dawg. I hated your flow the most, and half the time the rhymes were late, so it didn't really seem like it rhymed until you scan it. Your metas were kinda corny, like that Terry Benedict one (Ocean's Eleven ain't a popular MC reference LOL).
Your personals were kinda decent, but I know for a fact that you can come so much stronger!!! Keep elevatin'.
sHoRtAy140: I liked your verse. It was one of the best I've seen from you. I mean, it still could use work, but it was quite good. U had decent flow (although sometimes choppy) and I liked your concepts. Work on making harder hitting punches and personals. Nice drop there, though. Keep elevatin'.
A tough decision between friends...*sniffles*....LOLOLOL
Vote: sHoRtAy140
*Vote on my battles and I'll return the favor next time I'm online.*
iight thankz for the vote really apreciate it
1-0 uppin me ....uppin for me pleasse
lol, im jus ganna say, i underestimated shortay big time. This a good battle, but i didnt think hed come this strong. Keep votes commin people. Thx for feedback god.
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lol^^^yaa boi u underestamated me lol ......
bump.....
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