MoTiOn SiCkNeSs (first drop in a hott min.)

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Intro: Some things need years to develop…others…only need days. Some things possess vast amounts of tangible power…others…obtain endless amounts of indescribable power. Some things devastate and destroy…others…complete and rebuild. There is one thing…I know…which has the ability to attain all of these characteristics…

Mornin’ arrives…and you don’t want ta get Out of Bed/
Open your eyes…and shut em’, disgraced with How ya Live/
Talented…but Now you Quit, much rather be Boxed…Up Inside/
Ignore emotions…About ta Flip, tragically Dropped and Stuck with Pride/
Oblivious to Illustrious Lies…so your painfully Scared to Love/
No one Cares Enough…so when push comes…u’r not Prepared to Shove/

Slowly days creep by…alone and miserable…your head Hangs Low/
Isolate yourself…Blame Hope, can change face…but Caint Choke/
Clearly…Caint Cope…heartache and trouble from Relationship Struggles/
Kind demeanor…Basically Coupled with a torn interior…Makin’ Knees Buckle/
Numbness…Hatefully Doubled, tryin to move on and Forget tha Past/
Equipped to Last…your heart regains strength…now, a Gift that’s Wrapped/
So Quick ta Pass…up dates, love waits…eventually you Hope ta Live With/…
Someone who deserves your heart and accelerates love…Motion Sickness/

Feelings welcome eMotion…slowly you Re-Open your Eyes and Mind/
Obtain consciousness, Awoken by potent explosions of hope…you Decide to Find/
Remain Focused…Buy sum Time, behold Lyfe with a Grasp and Clutch/
Everyone Asks for Trust…deny critics… their only chance to Laugh it Up/
Slapped with Cuffs…idleness exists…Compelled to Traffic…Trapped Wit/…
Held you Captive…overWhelmed with Action…you can’t Tell what Happened/
Attracted…suddenly…Without a Magnet…her Beauty’s Relentless/
Determined…cant Truly Forget This…motivation’s ever-present…Losing Resistance/
Other Duties…Simplistic…Moving tha Distance to hopefully Catch Her Eye/
With her…Seconds Fly, she must be an angel from heaven…which Severed Ties/
Searching for Better Times…you both lock hands and create new Lyfe Goals/…

Life Grows, tha emptiness is gone…like Cupid…you’re LOVES Disciple/
Utopian dreams…Find Hope, so reality bestows Luv…with Oceans of Distance/
Vitality arrives along with Notions of Mystics, some call it Stupidity…others call it…

Love…I call it “Motion Sickness”/

[Mistral]

Hate to do this to you man, but you need to leave 2 links of replies or it gets closed, Thanks.

[Key-Low]

aight.............i'll drop those tanight, i thought we got rid of that reply shit, peace, 1

[Mistral]

Alright, sounds good to me

But I liked this piece man...Its good to see you back posting in Open Mic and dropping some nice pieces....You had some nice multies in this, I liked that, I like doing multies and reading pieces with them in, it just seems better to me...The flow was nice in this as well, flowed smoothly....The content in this I liked, I liked the way you described things in it....Vocab was nice like it always is from you lol....but overall a real nice piece....Im gonna nominate it for the top10.

[Chris Black]

This was a nice piece. Really liked the emotions and the rhyme scheme. Not much into the spelling shit in the first letter od every line, but surprisingly, it didnt take away from the drop. It has a stop and go flow, but in a good way. That matched with the miltis is what i really liked about this piece. Keep up the good work.

Please drop feedback here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...17#post1246817

[Key-Low]

good shit...........nyce lookin with tha feedback, here are my links:

1. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...65#post1249865

2. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...81#post1249881

[Key-Low]

ohh yeah..........dont sleep, thanx, peace, 1

[Key-Low]

how are you kats gonna sleep on my ish............damn, atleast read tha ish....lol, peace, 1

[Key-Low]

i'm gettin slept on more than an insomniacs pillow...........damn, look at my shit bytches.............i'm rick james, peace, 1