Lyrical MC vs Lust

[Lyrical MC]

10 lines max
no crew
no ryclycling
no dick ridin
AAAIIIGHT

[Lust]

yo ill checkin i about a hour im already battling some1 eles so hold up

[Lyrical MC]

ill burn you up wid vouls that will disablise,
ur rhymes are like water they only vapourise//
u dispatch good lyrics like water through a damm,
coz u can't beat me up 4 lyrics,like u did to ur old age gran//
coz like a boxer i roll wid da punch, and life is my task,
u so damm ugly and dats wen u wen u wear a mask//
my rhymes are da origin of hip-hops elte,
theres more chance of having 3 feet,then u aving a good chance to compete//
life was Gods consept, and he filled it wid love and hate,
il put lyrical cap in LUST'S rep bfore it to late, coz he is classing himself..and its overate//
ur life is been lived as a cheep scate,dont complain tho,
coz atfer u've read dis you will be renewing ur flow..i gota find a real challenge,gota go....//

[Lyrical MC]

yo check in lust......drop ur verse soon dawg, i bin waitin for ages!!!!!!
aaaaiiight!!!!!

[..Mac..]

I think he got scared and went into a different web site

[Lust]

yo im back im checkign in now give me 30 mins to write my verse

[Holmes Jr.]

lmao lyrical mc should win by default cos lust is prewritin and just blatantly admitted to it...

[Lust]

i was misled i finnally found away to convince lyrical mc to drop dead
im here now dont pretend i didnt warn u ,bring it if you want
lyrical mc all you do is bitch and scream and shout, but then you ran ya mouth, and dissed the king out clout
oh shit Lust is here , whats this bout ? is lyrical mc gunna fuckign pout
i got 10 lines to finish u and i aint close to done yet
a english rapper wtf is that , do me a favor quit and go have some tea and crumpets
i got u hung with my lines like ur a fuckign puppet
u dont deserve to battle me ... u should quit
ur lines are whack, my lines are better then any lines u ever spit
you only get one chance to live u might as well die now

[Lust]

uppin for votes....................

[Rappin' Master]

Yo, dis was a weak battle, but lyrikal MC takes it purely because his verse had structure and flow. His verse wasnt the best that I have seen him produce but it was still enough to beat Lust. Both of them didnt contain any real hard hittin punches.
Lust obviously pre written as well.
but keep it up both you you. PZ

vote lyrikal MC

[Lyrical MC]

uppin 4 votes.....LUST YOUR SHIT IS PREWRITEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Its Illytizzle!™]

Lyrical.. a few relatively ok punches.. opener wasnt terrible.. u got the rite idea wiv metas i guess.. jus make em more personal an wittier..

Lust.. dawg u gotta sort it out.. there is nothin even like a flow.. each punch is old and stand alone.. an both ya opener an closer didnt rhyme, let alone make sense.

Vote = Lyrical

Drop a vote here if uv got enuff posts:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112120

... tsk tsk stk.

[mcpace123]

yo check in lust......drop ur verse soon dawg, i bin waitin for ages!!!!!!
aaaaiiight!!!!!

oi do u wana be instead? il mash u up

[Lyrical MC]

^^^^dnt free post on dis tread.....vote ppl vote plz.....!!!!aaaiiiggghhtt

[DNUFO2]

uhh..this battle was ok I guess. In my opinion you both need help when starting and ending your raps. I think lyrical MC had much better punches because I couldnt find many from Lust. Lyrical MC's rap at least had flow and structure. Lust's didn't. That's why Lyrical MC receives my vote.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded