20lines
no bitin
no dickridin
no h8
no recyclin
I spit 1st
20lines
no bitin
no dickridin
no h8
no recyclin
I spit 1st
ok wit da rulz. CHECKIN' IN >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Yo I spit ill, so challengin' me is gonna get you killed
But still, it's hard for you to chill
Cuz my homies r out there to make u thrill
I'm gonna burry you alive, so you betta decide
where you gonna hide cuz I'm not gonna be kind
I bet you doing just fine, layin your ass down wit your face under sunshine
But then suddenly an explosion, you flying round in the air
You've been hit wit a sensation but does anybody care?
Your bitch cryin with her hands in her hair, sayin it isn't fair
But i'm just wondering what does she wear?
This is just borin battlin against Rappin' Masta
Bet he sounds like real disasta
Haven't got the skills to write fasta
You're bout to be hit with bullets comin from my baretta
Or be prepared to be stabbed by my stiletta
I really think this masta shud blow a dick
He's gay after all, cuz he raps like shit
Don't have to think about givin me a lick
Cuz i blow you away, just gives me a kick
This battle is over, dude your verse is gonna have to be sick
Your turn
Come on Master where r u????????? Don't have all day.........
The world has had enough of Daffer22 finking dat hes the next eminem, hes soundng like a 12 year old girl on heluim,
u try and hit on girls by putting them on a cd,
just coz they all reject you, but not me,
Ur acne and ur unwanted facial hair,
makes u a relation to frankesteins creation,
so dis guy is in the D.E.D crew instead,
by the time iv finished with you, his crew will definetly be dead,
Just like a curtain, u need sum1 to pull yourself together,
afta iv ended my verse, ull be scarred forever,
This guys an expensive chocolate, hes from belguim,
but just like the chocolates, he aint yum,
ur new to da business, u got a lot to learn,
im closin in on a victory, which way r u gonna turn?
Come on ppl vote
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Wake Up Plz And Get Votin
ite ....dis battle waz "WAKKK".......both gotta elevate a lot.....but for dis battle.....i wuld have 2 say daffer won.....
sum of masterz shyt waz weak.....didnt make sense and didnt have any flow at all....no rhythm.... clozer waz ill
daffer- ur shyt waz sort of like a topical....but ur punches were iight n it sorta made sum sense.....ur structure waz weak n ur flow n' punches were weak...but i think u took dis one for rhyming more and making more sense....none of yall had punches.....work on that...n ya closer waz ill also...
punches:.....none...but daffer came a bit harder
sense: daffer....hiz verse sorta made sense....rapperz did 2 but it waz weak...no punches or flow
flow:.....none.....
structure:...rappin master......by a bit......werk on it
vote: daffer.....by a bit....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358
^^hit dis up wit ya honest opinion.....thnxx
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358
srry 2 freepost...but i took mah time 2 vote on ya battle...now plze hit dis up...
more votes plzzzzz
In this battle i say daffer won because his verse made more sense and he had better punches....both of you had somewhat of a flow...structure was a little off but like Killer-Emcee said you both need to elevate, Daffer got my vote but the battle wasn't all that good,u guyz should elevate.
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