10-20 lines
no crew, hate, d/r, or bullshit votes
Blind Spit
1 hour to spit
check in Venom
10-20 lines
no crew, hate, d/r, or bullshit votes
Blind Spit
1 hour to spit
check in Venom
R U pussy Venom, check in dawg...........
U have 15 minutes or else I am telling the MODs to close this.......check in pussy
yeah im here u fucker..............................
yo reply to me, so i know ur here too.......................
I'm here and I'm dropping in like 10 minutes so don't feel alone i"m dropping soon
(verse)
I’ll leave this guy icy freezin’, like his style has been so recent
This guy hangs his own self, when he throws one punchline that was decent
He only battles old women, so when I spit, I literally bend him
He got a lethal injection of wackness, that’s how come they call him venom
I pinned him, send him a loss quickly, so he will never forget me
This guy got a “little to excited” when the words “work it” came out of Missy
He hit me..........sike...........I got him looking lost in the night
This guys so retarded, he’d get shot, and then claim he saw a bright light
I don’t even have to change, that’s this guys style and his same claims
His rhymes are all history, like old pictures..........wit no frames
I’m disaster, a new hype, yet you couldn’t even be called a real rapper
Venom is another teen kid, who’s only job is to worship Marshall Mathers
Laughter means I’m inocent, so that must mean that comedy is medicine
But this venom kid couldn’t even think bright, if he was Thomas Edison
yo sorry my internet was shut down because of all the snow we have....
Spit dawg hurry up I didn't waste a verse on ya so spit ya shit dawg
Yo imma spit with in the next 30 mins............................
iight damn dawg to much free posting in this bitch damn no more juss spit and if any MODs read this it wasn't my fault
I'ma spit my wackest verse on this wannabe emcee
because obviously this fag has a facination with me
Really don't care if I win or lose against this sick freak
Venom'z A teen, you wish, this pedophile is on his peak
You think I'm lying.....? Well i got all the Evidence
Dude left me 6 private messages all in single sentences
I started to wonder if this fucker was a homosexual
And yes he is,he wanted to fuck not battle me textual
I read his verse, and thought mc's hurt him lyrically
not for this "SORE" loser punchlines hurt him phsically
he had no flow no structure and bad vocabulary
someone take him away get him a constabulary
now imma end this because this shit was a waste
But imma leave you venom's spit a deadly taste
Vote.............................................. .........
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Punches: 7
Flow: tie
Vocab: tie
Multies : 7
Structure: venom
over all i enjoyed 7's rhyme more since it had better punches and thats what wins battles, but u were both aight it wasnt a merkin or anything....but it allmoast could'eve been. VOTE: 7
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damn that was the best review i ever had....lmao.....
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