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35 minutes upon check in
blind spit
good luck
10-14 lines
35 minutes upon check in
blind spit
good luck
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..meter........hmm.....smh.... bout to merk him
Your greatest punches were ..erased.. while the rest-were-irrelevant
You'll never elevate like your "skills caught up with the law", just "arrested development"
This pest-aint-intelligent but I'll still maim and dangle-this-nerd
A tangle-with-Verb? I should be "stepping in flower beds" the way I "trample-this-herb"
This tramp-is-absurd, I "get under your skin" to the point I could "dance-with-your-nerves"
Im invading the "corners of your mind", you feel my "hands-on-the-curb"?
In case you don’t figure-in-time I’ll let you know the kid-is-divine
Serve you like “Baby Backs” at “Chili’s” when I dangle your “rib”-in-your-“spine”
You so “gassed” that if you smelled smoke, then most likely your ass might-be-”burning”
Meters “wrapping hair” (rapping here) puts more people to “sleep” than an Afghans’ “nightly-Turban”
Only way you’d ever have “nerves of steel” is with the “shank-through-ya-skin”
I’m taking all categories for voters but at least in boredom-you’ll-win.....
~sonned....
Stepping to me launches you in the air…an crushes ya flat
Took your advice and looked up……….
…………..……..so I could see what ya sig’s laughing at!
Wanted in on this battle...couldn’t have been more wrong
Because you’re out of the woods when I beat you…….
…………...back to the cunt reside in which you belong!
I stepped into this battle vicious..ready to win at all costs
What a surprise it was for me……….
……………………………when at any rate, you lost!
Trying to hang with me…you’re one of the week I ditch
Woke up to check the calendar……
…………………….................and then I sunday bitch!
Two of my verses should be posted..make it even lyrically
Because you’d have to bite my entire verse…..
………………………………….to get a taste of victory!
I merked you in this battle…but who really won is blurred
Because I have to hear this bitch squeal…
…………….……..….after I made him a broken record!
Running with IJL……and you can’t even step to them
Ya only in that wack crew……
……………….’cuz you couldn’t beat so joined ‘em!
awaiting yours*.... but for real duck don't duck this shit i wanted to battle u cuz u were experianced im sick of NEWBS dodgin shit....
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sry bout that last post.... uppin for votes..............................
srry 2 freepost....but virtuso....u 4got 2 poll vote in mah battle....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358
na i jsut did.... drop ur vote honest vote in this now
wow......madddddd nicee battle.....4reall....dis iz an honest vote:tie......
vitusoz waz niceee...pretty funny
meterz was more serious....but yet had a lot of decent punches....
i seriously call this match a draw....
at first wen i saw meterz name id think hed won...but nahh.....dis waz a tite battle...
great punches thrown.....great flow by both...sum linez in both had me crakin....
so vote: tie.....
datz how i c it.....
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vote on this and return tha fava!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ummm..aight battle..had one emcee with wordplay
Had another one with punches and personals...
Umm..Virt...you need to take out tha "around tha words"
It takes alot away from tha flow...and ppl know where your punches are
Meters had more and consistant punches and was tha only one w/ personals
he had good flow..but meters..I wouldn't do that structure in FL man...
People don't understand that structure here and they vote against it..
Look s like you some of tha same concepts as me....lol
so
v/ Meters
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meter got this this in my opinion it was a good battle from both sides its juss virtuso u need to shorten ur lines up a bit that really threw off ya flow but ur punches was decent...and meters u had good personals punches and flow so u took this...
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